Package: systemd-ui
Version: 3-1
Severity: minor
The extended description contains:
It also provides process supervision using cgroups and the ability to not only
depend on other init script being started, but also availability of a given
mount point or D-Bus service.
The noun phrase "other init script" is missing a determiner (the zero article could be used if
"script" was plural). "another init script" might be intended.
By the way, the rest of the sentence has the same problem ("but also availability of
a given mount point or D-Bus service").
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