Package: apt-mirror
Version:
Severity: minor
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Hi
I was looking into apt-mirror and noticed a few things that were
easy to fix. Please consider the attached patch (against current git).
-- System Information:
Debian Release: 6.0.8
APT prefers oldstable
APT policy: (990, 'oldstable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)
Kernel: Linux 3.2.0-0.bpo.4-amd64 (SMP w/8 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_AU.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_AU.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
From: vincent.mcint...@csiro.au
Date: Tue, 28 Jan 2014 15:50:23 +1100
Subject: [PATCH] spelling and grammar improvements
---
apt-mirror | 20 ++++++++++----------
1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/apt-mirror b/apt-mirror
index 455fa85..81b13e3 100755
--- a/apt-mirror
+++ b/apt-mirror
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ A small and efficient tool that lets you mirror a part of or
the whole Debian GNU/Linux distribution or any other apt sources.
Main features:
- * It uses a config similar to apts F<sources.list>
- * It's fully pool comply
+ * It uses a config similar to apt's F<sources.list>
+ * It's fully pool compliant
* It supports multithreaded downloading
* It supports multiple architectures at the same time
* It can automatically remove unneeded files
- * It works well on overloaded channel to internet
+ * It works well on an overloaded internet connection
* It never produces an inconsistent mirror including while mirroring
* It works on all POSIX compliant systems with perl and wget
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ After you setup the configuration file you may run as root:
# su - apt-mirror -c apt-mirror
-Or uncomment line in F</etc/cron.d/apt-mirror> to enable daily mirror updates.
+Or uncomment the line in F</etc/cron.d/apt-mirror> to enable daily mirror updates.
=head1 FILES
@@ -52,17 +52,17 @@ F</var/spool/apt-mirror/skel>
Place for temporarily downloaded indexes
F</var/spool/apt-mirror/var>
- Log files placed here. URLs and MD5 summs also here.
+ Log files placed here. URLs and MD5 checksums also here.
=head1 CONFIGURATION EXAMPLES
-The mirror.list configuration supports many options, the file is well commented explinging each option.
-here are some sample mirror configuration lines showing the various supported ways :
+The mirror.list configuration supports many options, the file is well commented explaining each option.
+Here are some sample mirror configuration lines showing the various supported ways :
Normal:
deb http://example.com/debian stable main contrib non-free
-Arch Specific: ( many other arch's are supported )
+Arch Specific: ( many other architectures are supported )
deb-powerpc http://example.com/debian stable main contrib non-free
HTTP and FTP Auth or non-standard port:
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ foreach (keys %urls_to_download) {
}
######################################################################################
-## Main download prepair
+## Main download preparations
%urls_to_download = ();
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ sub proceed_index_gz {
close STREAM;
}
-print "Proceed indexes: [";
+print "Processing indexes: [";
foreach (@config_sources) {
my ($uri, $distribution, @components) = @{$_};
--
1.7.2.5
