Package: lintian
Version: 2.5.20
Severity: minor
Control: tags -1 + patch

Dear Maintainer,

The description of tag ‘privacy-breach-google-adsense’ has some
typographical and grammatical errors and ambiguities.

Attached is a patch to improve the description of this tag.

-- 
 \      “As soon as we abandon our own reason, and are content to rely |
  `\       upon authority, there is no end to our troubles.” —Bertrand |
_o__)                                Russell, _Unpopular Essays_, 1950 |
Ben Finney <b...@benfinney.id.au>
diff --git a/checks/files.desc b/checks/files.desc
index fd6ccae..c4258e0 100644
--- a/checks/files.desc
+++ b/checks/files.desc
@@ -940,16 +940,16 @@ Tag: privacy-breach-google-adsense
 Severity: serious
 Certainty: possible
 Info: This package creates a privacy breach by using Google Adsense.
- Google Adsense is a program run by Google that allows publishers of
- content sites to serve automatic advertisement. Unfortunately, it means
+ Google Adsense is a service run by Google that allows publishers of web
+ sites to automatically serve advertisements. Unfortunately, it requires
  tracking and breaching privacy of our users.
  .
- This tag track also tracks the use of related obsolete privacy breaker
- software Urchin WebAnalytics.
+ This tag can also indicate the use of related obsolete privacy breaker
+ software, Urchin WebAnalytics.
  .
- Note that using Google Adsense in local webpage copy is a violation
- of Google Adsense terms of use and thus a serious bug. This violation
- renders this package not distribuable.
+ Note that using Google Adsense in a local copy of a page is a violation of
+ Google Adsense terms of use. This violation renders this package not
+ distributable in Debian, and thus a serious bug.
 
 Tag: privacy-breach-w3c-valid-html
 Severity: serious

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