Package: procps Version: 1:3.3.4-2 Severity: minor Tags: patch File: /usr/share/man/man8/sysctl.8.gz
I am not a native English speaker. Am I right that the current phrasing is unfortunate? --- sysctl.8 2013-11-17 04:31:28.538097363 +0200 +++ sysctl.8 2013-11-17 04:28:09.000000000 +0200 @@ -142,9 +142,9 @@ The .B base_reachable_time and .B retrans_time -are deprecated. The sysctl command does not allow changing values of there -parameters. Users who insist to use deprecated kernel interfaces should values -to /proc file system by other means. For example: +are deprecated. The sysctl command does not allow setting values of these +parameters. Users who insist on using deprecated kernel interfaces should access +the /proc file system by other means. For example: .PP echo 256 > /proc/sys/net/ipv6/neigh/eth0/base_reachable_time .SH FILES -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
