Dear Debian maintainer,

On Saturday, August 17, 2013, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for miniupnpd.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Saturday, August 17, 2013. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- miniupnpd.old/debian/miniupnpd.templates    2013-08-17 07:53:13.557776725 
+0200
+++ miniupnpd/debian/miniupnpd.templates        2013-09-05 07:04:45.988291394 
+0200
@@ -1,25 +1,36 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: miniupnpd/start_daemon
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Start the MiniUPnP daemon?
- Select if the MiniUPnP daemon should started automatically at boot time.
+_Description: Start the MiniUPnP daemon automatically?
+ Choose this option if the MiniUPnP daemon should start automatically,
+ now and at boot time.
 
 Template: miniupnpd/listen
 Type: string
-_Description: IP address to listen for UPnP queries on your LAN:
- The MiniUPnP daemon will listen for requests on your local network. Please
+_Description: LAN IP address to listen on for UPnP queries:
+ The MiniUPnP daemon will listen for requests on the local network. Please
  enter the IP address it should listen on.
 
 Template: miniupnpd/iface
 Type: string
-_Description: External WAN network interface where to open ports:
- The MiniUPnP daemon will listen on a specific IP address on your LAN, then it
- will open ports on your WAN interface. Enter the name of your WAN network
- interface on which the MiniUPnP daemon will do the port forwarding.
+_Description: External WAN network interface to open ports on:
+ The MiniUPnP daemon will listen on a specific IP address on the local
+ network, then open ports on the WAN interface. Please enter the name of
+ the WAN network interface on which the MiniUPnP daemon should perform
+ port forwarding.
 
 Template: miniupnpd/ip6script
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Enable ip6tables script?
- Uppon startup of the MiniUPnP daemon, the init script can initialize the
- MiniUPnP IPv6 firewall chain.
+_Description: Enable IPv6 firewall chain?
+ Please specify whether the MiniUPnP daemon should run its
+ ip6tables script on startup to initialize the IPv6 firewall chain.
--- miniupnpd.old/debian/control        2013-08-17 07:53:13.557776725 +0200
+++ miniupnpd/debian/control    2013-08-28 06:58:46.387066770 +0200
@@ -11,12 +11,10 @@
 Package: miniupnpd
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf, iptables, iproute, 
uuid-runtime, net-tools
-Description: daemon providing UPnP Internet Gateway Device (IGD) services
- MiniUPnPd is a small daemon providing UPnP Internet Gateway Device (IGD)
- services to your network. UPnP and NAT-PMP are used to improve internet
- connectivity for devices behind a NAT router. Any peer to peer network
- application such as games, IM, etc. can benefit from a NAT router supporting
- UPnP and/or NAT-PMP. For example the latest generation Microsoft XBOX 360 and
- Sony Playstation 3 game machines use UPnP commands to enable the online play
- with the XBOX Live service and the Playstation Network. It has been reported
- that MiniUPnPd is correctly working with the two consoles.
+Description: UPnP and NAT-PMP daemon for gateway routers
+ MiniUPnPd is a small daemon which can be installed on a NAT router to
+ provide UPnP Internet Gateway Device and Port Mapping Protocol services,
+ enabling clients on the LAN to ask for port redirections. It is
+ compatible with peer-to-peer software, messaging applications, and games
+ consoles that connect to online services (including Xbox LIVE and the
+ PlayStation Network).
--- miniupnpd.old/debian/changelog      2013-08-17 07:53:13.557776725 +0200
+++ miniupnpd/debian/changelog  2013-09-23 18:41:02.822684254 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,18 @@
+miniupnpd (1.8.20130730-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #719950
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #722278
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #722602
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #723025
+  * German (Chris Leick).  Closes: #723147
+  * French (Baptiste Jammet).  Closes: #723768
+  * Portuguese (Américo Monteiro).  Closes: #724029
+  * Japanese (victory).  Closes: #724310
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Sat, 17 Aug 2013 08:06:34 +0200
+
 miniupnpd (1.8.20130730-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Uploading to unstable.

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