Le Fri, Jun 21, 2013 at 07:20:09AM +0200, Christian PERRIER a écrit : > Dear Debian maintainer, > > On Sunday, June 02, 2013, I notified you of the beginning of a review process > concerning debconf templates for cloud-init. > > The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates, > and the final proposed changes are attached to this update to the > original bug report. > Description: cloud infrastructure initialization system > Cloud-init provides a framework and tool to configure and customize > virtual machine instances for Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) clouds. > It can for example set a default locale and hostname, generate SSH > private host keys, add SSH keys to a user's authorized_keys so they can > log in, set up ephemeral mount points, and run user-provided scripts. > . > Various methods are supported for passing data to the instance at launch > time, including the standard interfaces of multiple IaaS platforms.
Hi Christian and Justin, sorry for lagging in my answers. For the short description, I think that "initialization system for infrastructure cloud instances" is more correct, because cloud-init initialises the instances (that is, the virtual machines), not on the infrastructure that manages them. The long description is already much improved compared to the original, but if I could make one last proposition, it would be to de-jargonize further the parts about ~/.ssh/authorized_keys and IaaS. How about the following ? Description: initialization system for infrastructure cloud instances Cloud-init provides a framework and tool to configure and customize virtual machine instances for Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) clouds platforms. It can for example set a default locale and hostname, generate SSH private host keys, install SSH public keys for logging in a default account, set up ephemeral mount points, and run user-provided scripts. . Various methods are supported for passing data to the instance at launch time, including the standard interfaces of multiple platforms. Cheers, -- Charles Plessy Tsurumi, Kanagawa, Japan -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
