Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the ircd-hybrid source package.
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Rationale:
--- ircd-hybrid.old/debian/ircd-hybrid.templates 2013-06-03
07:12:27.370436479 +0200
+++ ircd-hybrid/debian/ircd-hybrid.templates 2013-06-07 19:25:02.686609803
+0200
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
Template: ircd-hybrid/no-more-ssl
Type: boolean
Default: true
-_Description: All OpenSSL support is now disabled by default; continue?
- Due to licensing issues ircd-hybrid is no longer built by default with
+_Description: Continue with now disabled OpenSSL support?
+ Due to licensing issues, ircd-hybrid is no longer built by default with
OpenSSL. This will be addressed in a future release, pending a rewrite
of the SSL layer with GNUTLS.
We tend to avoid complicated sentences in templates synopsis. Hence my
simplication proposal.
Add a comma to where it belongs (imho).
.
- If any of your existing server links take advantage of cryptlinks, refer
+ If any of existing server links take advantage of cryptlinks, refer
to /usr/share/doc/ircd-hybrid/CRYPTLINKS.txt to find out how to build
- ircd-hybrid with SSL support (easily.)
+ ircd-hybrid with SSL support.
Drop "your": it might be not "my" server.
Drop "easily": indeed you don't know if that will be easy..:-)
Template: ircd-hybrid/restart_on_upgrade
Type: boolean
@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@
the daemon would probably lead you to problems.
.
If you refuse, you have to restart ircd-hybrid yourself if you
- upgraded, by typing `invoke-rc.d ircd-hybrid restart' whenever it
+ upgraded, by typing "invoke-rc.d ircd-hybrid restart" whenever it
suits you.
Use double quotes, which is what we standardized in other reviews.
Template: ircd-hybrid/upgrade_secure_links_warn
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Upgrade ircd-hybrid to version without cryptlink support?
- ircd-hybrid 8.x includes a change to the way secure server links are
+ The 8.x version of ircd-hybrid includes a change to the way secure server
links are
implemented, which is not backwards-compatible with ircd-hybrid 7.x,
from which you are upgrading.
.
Avoid leading lowercase letter forthe sentence
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Upgrade ircd-hybrid to version without compatible services?
- ircd-hybrid 8.x includes a change to the way services are supported, which
+ The 8.x version of ircd-hybrid includes a change to the way services are
supported, which
which is not compatible with hybserv.
Same here
.
- It is planned to package anope, a Hybrid 8 compatible services system,
- later.
+ It is planned to package anope, an Hybrid 8-compatible services system,
+ in the future.
"later than what"? So, let's tell it will happen in the future..:-)
--- ircd-hybrid.old/debian/control 2013-06-03 07:12:27.370436479 +0200
+++ ircd-hybrid/debian/control 2013-06-07 19:26:35.965316177 +0200
@@ -28,12 +28,12 @@
Description: high-performance secure IRC server
ircd-hybrid is a stable, high-performance IRC server that features:
.
- * If enabled, SSL client support and server-to-server RSA encryption.
- * Compressed server links
- * Channel exceptions (+e) and invitation exceptions (+I).
- * New configuration file format.
- * Halfops (+h) and anti-spam user mode +g.
- * Dynamically loadable modules.
+ * If enabled, SSL client support and server-to-server RSA encryption;
+ * Compressed server links;
+ * Channel exceptions (+e) and invitation exceptions (+I);
+ * New configuration file format;
+ * Halfops (+h) and anti-spam user mode +g;
+ * Dynamically loadable modules;
* Channel and nickname RESV's (reservations).
Standardize on the use of semi-colons for enumerations.
.
It is also the IRC server of choice on the venerable EFnet, although
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}
Suggests: ircd-hybrid
-Description: development files for ircd-hybrid
+Description: high-performance secure IRC server - development files
These are the headers used when writing modules for ircd-hybrid.
For more information on how to write these modules, see the ircd-hybrid
documentation or example_module.c in the source code for ircd-hybrid.
Use the same style for tyhe synopsis, with a boilerplat.
Note that I'm not fond of the last paragraph ("if you have clued") but
couldn't find anything really appealing.
--
Template: ircd-hybrid/no-more-ssl Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Continue with now disabled OpenSSL support? Due to licensing issues, ircd-hybrid is no longer built by default with OpenSSL. This will be addressed in a future release, pending a rewrite of the SSL layer with GNUTLS. . If any of existing server links take advantage of cryptlinks, refer to /usr/share/doc/ircd-hybrid/CRYPTLINKS.txt to find out how to build ircd-hybrid with SSL support. Template: ircd-hybrid/restart_on_upgrade Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Restart ircd-hybrid on each upgrade? You may choose whether or not you want to restart the ircd-hybrid daemon every time you install a new version of this package. . Sometimes, you do not want to do this. For instance, if you are doing the upgrade and loading IRCd modules at runtime. Failing to restart the daemon would probably lead you to problems. . If you refuse, you have to restart ircd-hybrid yourself if you upgraded, by typing "invoke-rc.d ircd-hybrid restart" whenever it suits you. Template: ircd-hybrid/upgrade_secure_links_warn Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Upgrade ircd-hybrid to version without cryptlink support? The 8.x version of ircd-hybrid includes a change to the way secure server links are implemented, which is not backwards-compatible with ircd-hybrid 7.x, from which you are upgrading. . If you have any secure server links (cryptlinks) configured with this server, you should plan to either upgrade all servers in lock-step, or temporarily configure non-cryptlink server links, to ensure the continuity of your IRC links. Template: ircd-hybrid/upgrade_no_services_warn Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Upgrade ircd-hybrid to version without compatible services? The 8.x version of ircd-hybrid includes a change to the way services are supported, which which is not compatible with hybserv. . It is planned to package anope, an Hybrid 8-compatible services system, in the future.
--- ircd-hybrid.old/debian/ircd-hybrid.templates 2013-06-03
07:12:27.370436479 +0200
+++ ircd-hybrid/debian/ircd-hybrid.templates 2013-06-07 19:25:02.686609803
+0200
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
Template: ircd-hybrid/no-more-ssl
Type: boolean
Default: true
-_Description: All OpenSSL support is now disabled by default; continue?
- Due to licensing issues ircd-hybrid is no longer built by default with
+_Description: Continue with now disabled OpenSSL support?
+ Due to licensing issues, ircd-hybrid is no longer built by default with
OpenSSL. This will be addressed in a future release, pending a rewrite
of the SSL layer with GNUTLS.
.
- If any of your existing server links take advantage of cryptlinks, refer
+ If any of existing server links take advantage of cryptlinks, refer
to /usr/share/doc/ircd-hybrid/CRYPTLINKS.txt to find out how to build
- ircd-hybrid with SSL support (easily.)
+ ircd-hybrid with SSL support.
Template: ircd-hybrid/restart_on_upgrade
Type: boolean
@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@
the daemon would probably lead you to problems.
.
If you refuse, you have to restart ircd-hybrid yourself if you
- upgraded, by typing `invoke-rc.d ircd-hybrid restart' whenever it
+ upgraded, by typing "invoke-rc.d ircd-hybrid restart" whenever it
suits you.
Template: ircd-hybrid/upgrade_secure_links_warn
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Upgrade ircd-hybrid to version without cryptlink support?
- ircd-hybrid 8.x includes a change to the way secure server links are
+ The 8.x version of ircd-hybrid includes a change to the way secure server
links are
implemented, which is not backwards-compatible with ircd-hybrid 7.x,
from which you are upgrading.
.
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Upgrade ircd-hybrid to version without compatible services?
- ircd-hybrid 8.x includes a change to the way services are supported, which
+ The 8.x version of ircd-hybrid includes a change to the way services are
supported, which
which is not compatible with hybserv.
.
- It is planned to package anope, a Hybrid 8 compatible services system,
- later.
+ It is planned to package anope, an Hybrid 8-compatible services system,
+ in the future.
--- ircd-hybrid.old/debian/control 2013-06-03 07:12:27.370436479 +0200
+++ ircd-hybrid/debian/control 2013-06-07 19:26:35.965316177 +0200
@@ -28,12 +28,12 @@
Description: high-performance secure IRC server
ircd-hybrid is a stable, high-performance IRC server that features:
.
- * If enabled, SSL client support and server-to-server RSA encryption.
- * Compressed server links
- * Channel exceptions (+e) and invitation exceptions (+I).
- * New configuration file format.
- * Halfops (+h) and anti-spam user mode +g.
- * Dynamically loadable modules.
+ * If enabled, SSL client support and server-to-server RSA encryption;
+ * Compressed server links;
+ * Channel exceptions (+e) and invitation exceptions (+I);
+ * New configuration file format;
+ * Halfops (+h) and anti-spam user mode +g;
+ * Dynamically loadable modules;
* Channel and nickname RESV's (reservations).
.
It is also the IRC server of choice on the venerable EFnet, although
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}
Suggests: ircd-hybrid
-Description: development files for ircd-hybrid
+Description: high-performance secure IRC server - development files
These are the headers used when writing modules for ircd-hybrid.
For more information on how to write these modules, see the ircd-hybrid
documentation or example_module.c in the source code for ircd-hybrid.
Source: ircd-hybrid Section: net Priority: optional Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 8), zlib1g-dev, docbook-to-man, flex, bison, libpcre3-dev (>= 6.3), automake1.13, dh-autoreconf, libltdl-dev Build-Conflicts: autoconf2.13 Maintainer: Dominic Hargreaves <d...@earth.li> Standards-Version: 3.9.4 Homepage: http://ircd-hybrid.com/ Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=users/dom/ircd-hybrid.git Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/users/dom/ircd-hybrid.git Package: ircd-hybrid Architecture: any Conflicts: ircd-ircu, ircd-irc2, dancer-ircd, oftc-hybrid Pre-Depends: debconf (>= 0.5) | debconf-2.0 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Provides: ircd Recommends: whois Suggests: hybserv Description: high-performance secure IRC server ircd-hybrid is a stable, high-performance IRC server that features: . * If enabled, SSL client support and server-to-server RSA encryption; * Compressed server links; * Channel exceptions (+e) and invitation exceptions (+I); * New configuration file format; * Halfops (+h) and anti-spam user mode +g; * Dynamically loadable modules; * Channel and nickname RESV's (reservations). . It is also the IRC server of choice on the venerable EFnet, although EFnet also uses the Ratbox, ComStud, and the Hybrid 6 IRCDs. Package: hybrid-dev Section: devel Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends} Suggests: ircd-hybrid Description: high-performance secure IRC server - development files These are the headers used when writing modules for ircd-hybrid. For more information on how to write these modules, see the ircd-hybrid documentation or example_module.c in the source code for ircd-hybrid. . It also includes mbuild-hybrid, a shell script that simplifies building and installation of such modules. This shell script is simplistic and assumes a lot; if you possess clue, you will know what to do anyway.
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