Hi Thomas,

Thomas Lange wrote:

> Since the FAI guide is not updated to 4.x it's important to inform the
> user about important changes, which I did with this NEWS
> entries. Maybe some of them are not that important, but it's a good
> list to check when upgrading from FAI 3.x to 4.x.
>
> Do you have any suggestions how to improve the NEWS entry?

Thanks for asking.  Yes, I do.

I would suggest some text that (1) is less overwhelming and (2) makes
it crystal clear to sysadmins what immediate action on their part is
required.  For example:

        fai (4.0) unstable; urgency=low

          This is a major update of FAI which brings important changes,
          and the FAI guide has not been updated to reflect them yet.

          Changes include:
          - new script names
          - new configuration file names
          - some tasks were renamed or reorganized
          - new features that may affect you because <explanation
            of why multicore support, huge speedup, etc require
            immediate action goes here>
          - new log files

          Your scripts and configuration may need changes to work
          with the new version.  See /usr/share/doc/fai/changelog.Debian.gz
          for details.

         -- Thomas Lange <la...@debian.org>  <date>

Does that help?

Thanks,
Jonathan


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