Package: debian-handbook Version: 6.0+20120509 Severity: minor Hello Raphaël, I've just finished reading chapter 10 and I am sending my usual list of suggestions (shorter than for other chapter of comparable length, actually: well done!).
Section 10.2.2. Virtual Private Network with SSH ------------------------------------------------ | is used two times, Isn't s/two times/twice/ more correct English? Section 10.3.1. Principle and Mechanism --------------------------------------- | to which category it belongs in. I am under the impression that s/belongs in/belongs to/ would be more correct English. | http://www.linux-france.org/prj/inetdoc/guides/lartc/lartc.html It would be better if an English document were referenced... Section 10.7.3. DHCP and DNS ---------------------------- Typo? s/An zone that/A zone that/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
