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Package: release-notes
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Tags: l10n, patch
While updating my translation of the release-notes, I have
encountered the following typos, which I thought you might like to
fix before the next release.
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1.
po:9
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 The most recent version of this document is always
available at <url id=
\"&url-release-notes;\">. If your version is more than a month old, you
might wish to download the latest version.]
- version.]
+ version.
2.
po:95
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 You have to make sure before upgrading your system that
you have sufficient
hard disk space when you start the full system upgrade described in
<ref id=
\"upgrading_other\">. You will first need enough hard disk on the
filesystem
partition that holds <file>/var/</file> to temporarily download the
packages
that will be installed in your system. After the download, you will
probably
need more space in other filesystem partitions in order to both install
upgraded packages (which might contain bigger binaries or more data)
and new
packages that will be pulled in for the upgrade. If your system does not
have sufficient space you might end up with an incomplete upgrade
that might
be difficult to recover from.
+
Before upgrading your system, you have to make sure you have
sufficient hard-disk space to start the full-system upgrade described
in <ref id=\"upgrading_other\">. To start with, in the filesystem
partition containing <file>/var/</file>, you need enough hard-disk
space to download temporarily all the packages which will be
installed on your system. After the download, in other filesystem
partitions, you will probably need more space to install both the
upgraded packages (which can contain larger binaries or more data)
and the new packages required for the upgrade. If your system does
not have enough space for these processes, you may end up with an
incomplete upgrade, a difficult situation to fix.
3.
po:96
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 Both <prgn>aptitude</prgn> and <prgn>apt</prgn> will
show you detailed
information of the disk space needed for the installation. You can
see this
estimate before executing the actual upgrade running:
- information of the disk space
+ information about the disk space
- You can see this estimate before executing the actual upgrade running:
+ Before executing the upgrade, you can see this estimate by running:
4.
po:100
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 Remove old packages you no longer use. If you have
<prgn>popularity-contest</
prgn> installed you can use <prgn>popcon-largest-unused</prgn> to
list the
packages you do not use in the system that occupy the most space. You
can
also use <prgn>deborphan</prgn> or <prgn>debfoster</prgn> to find
obsolete
packages (see <ref id=\"obsolete\">)
- installed you can use
+ installed, you can use
- (see <ref id=\"obsolete\">)
+ (see <ref id=\"obsolete\">).
5.
po:101
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 Remove packages that take up too much space and you do
not have an immediate
need for (you can always reinstall them after the upgrade). You can list
packages that take up most of the disk space with <prgn>dpigs</prgn>
(available in the <prgn>debian-goodies</prgn> package) or with
<prgn>wajig</
prgn> (running <prgn>wajig size</prgn>).
- Remove packages that take up too much space and you do not have an
immediate
need for
+ Remove packages taking up too much space, which are not currently
needed
- You can list packages that take up most of the disk space with
+ You can list the packages taking up most of the disk space with
6.
.po:104
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 In case you run a kernel prior to 2.4.1, you need to
upgrade to (at least)
the 2.4-series before upgrading the <package>glibc</package>, which
means:
best before starting with the upgrade. It is recommended to upgrade
to the
2.6-kernel series.
- which means: best before starting with the upgrade.
+ so preferably before starting the upgrade.
7.
po:209
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 If you are currently using a kernel from the 2.4
series, the older stable
Linux kernel series, you should upgrade to a 2.6 series kernel, as
2.4 is no
longer supported in &releasename;. If you are currently using a
kernel from
the 2.2 series, you must upgrade to (at least) the 2.4 series, better
to a
2.6 series kernel prior to upgrading your packages. Some general issues
associated with an upgrade to 2.6 are documented in <ref id=\"upgrade-
to-2.6
\">.
- better to a 2.6 series kernel prior to
+ preferably to a 2.6 series kernel, prior to
8.
po:211
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 <package>initrd-tools</package> is no longer supported
and has been
superseded by <package>initramfs-tools</package> and <package>yaird</
package>. Upgrading to an &releasename; kernel will cause
<package>initramfs-
tools</package> to be installed by default. <![ %defaulted-2.4 [ If
you are
upgrading from a 2.4 kernel to a 2.6 kernel for the first time, you
must use
<package>initramfs-tools</package>. Using <package>yaird</package> will
cause linux-image-2.6 installations to fail if you are running a 2.2
or 2.4
kernel. ]]>
- cause linux-image-2.6 installations
+ cause <package>linux-image-2.6</package> installations
?
9.
.po:213
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 &releasename; no longer provides support for
<prgn>devfs</prgn>. It is
recommended that users switch to udev for dynamic <file>/dev</file>
management. Debian kernels no longer include support for <prgn>devfs</
prgn>,
so <prgn>devfs</prgn> users will need to manually convert their systems
before upgrading to an &releasename; kernel.
- switch to udev
+ switch to <prgn>udev </prgn>
- to manually convert their systems
+ to convert their systems manually
- Debian
+ &debian; (?)
10.
po:214
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 If you see the string 'devfs' in <file>/proc/mounts</
file>, you are likely
using devfs. Any config files that reference devfs style names will
need to
be adjusted to use udev style names. Files that are most likely to
refer to
devfs style device names include <file>/etc/fstab</file>, <file>/etc/
lilo.
conf</file>, <file>/boot/grub/menu.lst</file>, etc.
- 'devfs'
+ <quote>devfs</quote> (correct tag?)
- you are likely using devfs.
+ you are most likely using <prgn>devfs</prgn>.
OR
+ you are probably using <prgn>devfs</prgn>.
- Any config files that reference devfs style names will need to
be adjusted to use udev style names. Files that are most likely to
refer to
devfs style device names include <file>/etc/fstab</file>, <file>/etc/
lilo.
conf</file>, <file>/boot/grub/menu.lst</file>, etc.
+ Any config files that reference <prgn>devfs</prgn> style names will
need to
be adjusted to use <prgn>udev</prgn> style names. Files that are most
likely to refer to <prgn>devfs</prgn> style device names include
<file>/etc/fstab</file>, <file>/etc/lilo.conf</file> and <file>/boot/
grub/menu.lst</file>.
(Note: you can use "include" or "etc." but not both, since "include"
means "here are some specific examples", and "etc." means "and the
rest". These two expressions are mutually exclusive. "e.g." is
similar to "include", so "e.g." and "etc." are also mutually
exclusive.)ppl
11.
po:216
Translator: ③ type: <heading></heading>
Original: ⌘0 Standard kernels contain SMP abilities
+ Standard kernels have SMP capacity.
(People have abilities. Non-living things have capacities, features,
functions etc.)
12.
po:266
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 Since 2.6.17, Linux uses TCP window scaling which is
specified in RFC 1323
in an aggressive way. Some servers have a broken behaviour, and announce
wrong window sizes for themselves. Please see the bugs <url id=
\"http://bugs.
debian.org/381262\" name=\"#381262\"> and <url id=\"http://bugs.debian.
org/395066\" name=\"#395066\"> for more information.
- Since 2.6.17, Linux uses TCP window scaling which is specified in
RFC 1323
in an aggressive way.
+ Since 2.6.17, Linux aggressively ,uses TCP window scaling which is
specified in RFC 1323.
(Otherwise, you're saying that it's mentioned aggressively in the RFC.)
13.
There are quite a few terms which should have tags, e.g. program
names without <prgn>, filenames without <file>, "Debian" instead of
"&debian;", but I don't have time to document them all, sorry.
14.
po:302
Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 exim (version 3.xx) has been unmaintained upstream for
years, and Debian has
dropped support for that version as well. If you are still using exim
3.xx,
please upgrade your exim installation to exim4 manually. Since exim4 is
already part of &oldreleasename, you can choose to do the upgrade on
your
&oldreleasename; system before the upgrade to &releasename;, or after
the
&releasename; upgrade at your convenience. Just remember that your
old exim
package is not going to be upgraded and that it won't get security
support
after support for &oldreleasename; will be discontinued.
- exim
+ <prgn>exim</prgn>
- exim4
+ <prgn>exim4</prgn>
- already part of &oldreleasename,
+ already part of &oldreleasename;,
- after support for &oldreleasename; will be discontinued.
+ after support for &oldreleasename; is discontinued.
OR
+ after support for &oldreleasename; has been discontinued.
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I hope this is useful.
Clytie Siddall (vi-VN, Vietnamese free-software translation team /
nhóm Việt hóa phần mềm tự do)
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