Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-21 01:45:18 -0600 (Fri, 21 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2061

Modified:
   /
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/perl.xml
Log:
 [EMAIL PROTECTED] (orig r2182):  [EMAIL PROTECTED] | 2006-07-20 21:41:40 -0700
 Reworded text in final-system to make it a bit clearer



Property changes on: 
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Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2181
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2182

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/perl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/perl.xml     2006-07-21 07:45:10 UTC (rev 
2060)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/perl.xml     2006-07-21 07:45:18 UTC (rev 
2061)
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
 
 <screen os="a01"><userinput>echo "127.0.0.1 localhost $(hostname)" &gt; 
/etc/hosts</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="a">To have full control over the way Perl is set up, run the
-    interactive <command>Configure</command> script and hand-pick the way
-    this package is built. If the defaults it auto-detects are suitable,
-    prepare Perl for compilation with:</para>
+    <para os="a">To have full control over the way Perl is set up, you can
+    run the interactive <command>Configure</command> script and hand-pick
+    the way this package is built. If you prefer instead to use the defaults
+    that Perl auto-detects, prepare Perl for compilation with:</para>
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure.gnu --prefix=/usr \
    -Dman1dir=/usr/share/man/man1 \

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