Author: jim Date: 2006-07-18 01:45:30 -0600 (Tue, 18 Jul 2006) New Revision: 2030
Modified: / trunk/BOOK/general.ent trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml trunk/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml trunk/BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml trunk/BOOK/packages.ent trunk/BOOK/patches.ent Log: [EMAIL PROTECTED] (orig r2151): [EMAIL PROTECTED] | 2006-07-17 21:25:42 -0700 Text fixes Property changes on: ___________________________________________________________________ Name: svk:merge - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2150 + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2151 Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:15 UTC (rev 2029) +++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030) @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ <!ENTITY clfs-root "http://cross-lfs.org/";> <!ENTITY clfs-wiki "http://trac.cross-lfs.org/";> <!ENTITY blfs-root "&lfs-root;blfs/"> -<!ENTITY faq-root "&clfs-root;wiki/faq"> +<!ENTITY faq-root "&clfs-wiki;wiki/faq"> <!ENTITY hints-root "&lfs-root;hints/downloads/files/"> <!ENTITY hints-index "&lfs-root;hints/list.html"> <!ENTITY livecd-root "&lfs-root;livecd/"> Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:15 UTC (rev 2029) +++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030) @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ <para>Deviating from this book does <emphasis>not</emphasis> mean that we will not help you. After all, the CLFS project is about personal preference. Be upfront about any changes to - the established procedure, this helps us evaluate and determine + the established procedure—this helps us evaluate and determine possible causes of your problem.</para> </note> Modified: trunk/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:15 UTC (rev 2029) +++ trunk/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink - url="http://cross-lfs.org/files/packages/&major-version;.&minor-version;.&extra-version;"/>.</para> + url="&packages-root;"/>.</para> <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere that is conveniently available throughout the entire build. A working @@ -41,11 +41,11 @@ <screen><userinput>mkdir -v $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen> - <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. <quote>Sticky</quote> - means that even if multiple users have write permission on a - directory, only the owner of a file can delete the file within a - sticky directory. The following command will enable the write and - sticky modes:</para> + <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. When a directory is + marked <quote>sticky</quote>, that means that even if multiple users have + write permission on that directory, any file within that directory can only be + deleted or modified by its owner. The following command will enable the + write and sticky modes:</para> <screen><userinput>chmod -v a+wt $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen> Modified: trunk/BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:15 UTC (rev 2029) +++ trunk/BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030) @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ These patches correct any mistakes in the packages that should be fixed by the maintainer. The patches also make small modifications to make the packages easier to work with. The following patches will be - needed to build an CLFS system:</para> + needed to build a CLFS system:</para> <variablelist role="materials"> Modified: trunk/BOOK/packages.ent =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/packages.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:15 UTC (rev 2029) +++ trunk/BOOK/packages.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?> -<!ENTITY packages-root "http://cross-lfs.org/files/packages/&generic-version;/";> +<!ENTITY packages-root "&clfs-root;files/packages/&generic-version;/"> <!-- Note: For empty *-home entities use " " not "" --> Modified: trunk/BOOK/patches.ent =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/patches.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:15 UTC (rev 2029) +++ trunk/BOOK/patches.ent 2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?> -<!ENTITY patches-root "http://cross-lfs.org/files/patches/&generic-version;/";> +<!ENTITY patches-root "&clfs-root;files/patches/&generic-version;/"> <!-- Start of Common Patches --> -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/cross-lfs FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
