Author: chris
Date: 2006-05-30 06:38:12 -0600 (Tue, 30 May 2006)
New Revision: 1696

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/mips64/glibc-n32.xml
   trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml
   trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64/glibc-n32.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml
Log:
Grammar fixes for multilib and 64-bit glibc instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/mips64/glibc-n32.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/mips64/glibc-n32.xml 2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC (rev 
1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/mips64/glibc-n32.xml 2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC (rev 
1696)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
     href="glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'de'])"/>
 
-    <para os="n1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into <filename
+    <para os="n1">Tell Glibc to install its 32-bit libraries into <filename
     class="directory">/tools/lib32</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen os="n2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/tools/lib32" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml     2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC 
(rev 1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml     2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC 
(rev 1696)
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
     href="glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'de'])"/>
 
-    <para os="n1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into <filename
+    <para os="n1">Tell Glibc to install its 64-bit libraries into <filename
     class="directory">/tools/lib64</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen os="n2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/tools/lib64" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml        2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC 
(rev 1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml        2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC 
(rev 1696)
@@ -72,10 +72,13 @@
     href="glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'de'])"/>
 
-    <para os="n1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into <filename
-    class="directory">/tools/lib64</filename>:</para>
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
+    href="../multilib/glibc.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'n1'])"/>
 
-<screen os="n2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/tools/lib64" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
+    href="../multilib/glibc.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'n2'])"/>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
     href="glibc.xml"

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64/glibc-n32.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64/glibc-n32.xml        2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC 
(rev 1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64/glibc-n32.xml        2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC 
(rev 1696)
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
     href="glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'f'])"/>
 
-    <para os="m1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into
+    <para os="m1">Tell Glibc to install its 32-bit libraries into
     <filename class="directory">/lib32</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen os="m2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/lib32" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml    2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC 
(rev 1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/glibc-64bit.xml    2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC 
(rev 1696)
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
     href="glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'f'])"/>
 
-    <para os="m1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into
+    <para os="m1">Tell Glibc to install its 64-bit libraries into
     <filename class="directory">/lib64</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen os="m2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/lib64" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml       2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC 
(rev 1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/glibc-64bit.xml       2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC 
(rev 1696)
@@ -57,10 +57,13 @@
     href="glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'f'])"/>
 
-    <para os="m1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into
-    <filename class="directory">/lib64</filename>:</para>
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
+    href="../multilib/glibc.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'m1'])"/>
 
-<screen os="m2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/lib64" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
+    href="../multilib/glibc.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'m2'])"/>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
     href="glibc.xml"

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml 2006-05-30 08:12:28 UTC (rev 
1695)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml 2006-05-30 12:38:12 UTC (rev 
1696)
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
     href="../common/glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'f'])"/>
 
-    <para os="l1">Now we make sure the Glibc goes into
+    <para os="l1">Tell Glibc to install its libraries into
     <filename class="directory">/lib</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen os="l2"><userinput>echo "slibdir=/lib" &gt;&gt; 
configparms</userinput></screen>

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