Author: chris
Date: 2006-05-17 11:47:43 -0600 (Wed, 17 May 2006)
New Revision: 1624
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/boot/common/sysvinit.xml
trunk/BOOK/boot/common/util-linux.xml
trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/glibc.xml
trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml
trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/introduction.xml
trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/variables.xml
Log:
More text updates
Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/common/sysvinit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/common/sysvinit.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC (rev 1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/common/sysvinit.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC (rev 1624)
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of Sysvinit</title>
- <para os="aa">Now we do some modifications so we can boot into this
- during our build:</para>
+ <para os="aa">Make some modifications to allow you to boot into
+ the minimal temp-system:</para>
<screen os="ab"><userinput>cp -v src/Makefile src/Makefile.orig
sed -e '[EMAIL PROTECTED]@[EMAIL PROTECTED]' \
Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/common/util-linux.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/common/util-linux.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC (rev
1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/common/util-linux.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC (rev
1624)
@@ -40,7 +40,8 @@
<para os="ba">Util-linux does not use the freshly installed headers and
libraries from the <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>
- directory by default. This is fixed by altering the configure
script:</para>
+ directory by default. This is fixed by altering the
+ <command>configure</command> script:</para>
<screen os="bb"><userinput>cp -v configure{,.orig}
sed -e 's@/usr/include@/tools/[EMAIL PROTECTED]' configure.orig >
configure</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/glibc.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC (rev
1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/glibc.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC (rev
1624)
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
href="../../final-system/common/glibc.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'f'])"/>
- <para os="dd">For NPTL enabled systems the following lines need
- to be added to <filename>config.cache</filename>:</para>
+ <para os="dd">The following lines need to be added to
+ <filename>config.cache</filename> for Glibc to support NPTL:</para>
<screen os="de"><userinput>echo "libc_cv_forced_unwind=yes" > config.cache
echo "libc_cv_c_cleanup=yes" >> config.cache</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC (rev
1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC (rev
1624)
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<screen os="af"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i
../&gcc-cross_search-patch;</userinput></screen>
- <para os="ag">Now setup the StartFile Spec to the correct library
+ <para os="ag">Change the StartFile Spec to point to the correct library
location:</para>
<screen os="ah"><userinput>echo "
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC (rev
1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC (rev
1624)
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
<para>Grant <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem> full access to
<filename class="directory">$LFS/cross-tools</filename> and
- and <filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename> by making <systemitem
+ <filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename> by making <systemitem
class="username">lfs</systemitem> the directorys' owner:</para>
<screen><userinput>chown -v lfs $LFS/tools
Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/introduction.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC
(rev 1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/introduction.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC
(rev 1624)
@@ -12,23 +12,24 @@
<para>This chapter shows how to compile and install a minimal Linux
system. This system will contain just enough tools to start
- constructing the final LFS system in <xref
+ constructing the final CLFS system in <xref
linkend="chapter-building-system"/> and allow a working environment
with more user convenience than a minimum environment would.</para>
- <para>The tools in this chapter are cross-compiled using the toolchain in
/cross-tools. The files compiled in this chapter will be installed under the
+ <para>The tools in this chapter are cross-compiled using the toolchain in
+ /cross-tools and will be installed under the
<filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename> directory to keep
them separate from the files installed in <xref
linkend="chapter-building-system"/> and the host production directories.
Since the packages compiled here are temporary, we do not want them to
- pollute the soon-to-be LFS system.</para>
+ pollute the soon-to-be CLFS system.</para>
<para>Check one last time that the <envar>LFS</envar> environment
variable is set up properly:</para>
<screen><userinput>echo $LFS</userinput></screen>
- <para>Make sure the output shows the path to the LFS partition's mount
+ <para>Make sure the output shows the path to the CLFS partition's mount
point, which is <filename class="directory">/mnt/lfs</filename>, using
our example.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/variables.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/variables.xml 2006-05-17 16:46:44 UTC (rev
1623)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/variables.xml 2006-05-17 17:47:43 UTC (rev
1624)
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<title>Build Variables</title>
- <para>Setup target specific variables for the compiler
+ <para>Setup target-specific variables for the compiler
and linkers:</para>
<screen><userinput>export CC="${LFS_TARGET}-gcc"
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