Author: chris
Date: 2006-05-01 11:22:43 -0600 (Mon, 01 May 2006)
New Revision: 1499
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml
trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml
trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml
Log:
Text/grammar fixes
Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml 2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev 1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml 2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev 1499)
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
<screen os="q"><literal>alias char-major-XXX some-module</literal></screen>
- <para os="r">Because of the complications with Hotplug, Udev, and modules,
+ <para os="r">Because of the complications with Udev and modules,
we strongly recommend starting with a completely non-modular kernel
configuration, especially if this is the first time using Udev.</para>
@@ -159,9 +159,8 @@
<para>Also, the headers in the system's <filename
class="directory">include</filename> directory should
<emphasis>always</emphasis> be the ones against which Glibc was
- compiled, that is, the ones from the Linux-Libc-Headers package,
- and therefore, should <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by
- the kernel headers.</para>
+ compiled (from the Linux-Headers package) and should
+ <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by the kernel headers.</para>
</warning>
</sect2>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml 2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev
1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml 2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev
1499)
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<title>Installation of Cross GCC Compiler with Static libgcc
and no Threads</title>
- <para os="aa">First make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs
file
+ <para os="aa">Make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
to ensure GCC uses our build environment:</para>
<screen os="ab"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i
../&gcc-specs-patch;</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml 2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC
(rev 1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml 2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC
(rev 1499)
@@ -35,12 +35,13 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of Powerpc-Utils</title>
- <para>This package, originally pmac-utils, has issues with NewWorld
macintoshes.
- The following patch fixes these issues and generally updates the
package.</para>
+ <para>This package, originally pmac-utils, has issues with
+ NewWorld Macintoshes. The following patch fixes these issues
+ and generally updates the package:</para>
<screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&powerpcutils-patch;</userinput></screen>
- <para>Compile the useful programs:</para>
+ <para>Compile the needed programs:</para>
<screen><userinput>make nvsetenv nvsetvol</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml 2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev
1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml 2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev
1499)
@@ -22,7 +22,8 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of Bzip2</title>
- <para os="ca">Remove the tests since they won't work on a
+ <para os="ca">Bzip's default Makefile target automatically runs
+ the testsuite as well. Disable the tests since they won't work on a
multi-architecture build:</para>
<screen os="cb"><userinput>cp -v Makefile{,.orig}
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