Author: chris
Date: 2006-04-18 08:39:00 -0600 (Tue, 18 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 1405
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml
trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tcl.xml
trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/mips/expect.xml
Log:
Minor text/grammar updates.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml 2006-04-18 03:44:23 UTC (rev
1404)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml 2006-04-18 14:39:00 UTC (rev
1405)
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<para os="b1">The configure system causes bison to be built without support
for internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
program is not already in $PATH. The following addition will correct
- this.</para>
+ this:</para>
<screen os="b2"><userinput>echo '#define YYENABLE_NLS 1' >>
config.h</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml 2006-04-18 03:44:23 UTC (rev
1404)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml 2006-04-18 14:39:00 UTC (rev
1405)
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
<title>Installation of GCC</title>
<para os="p1">The following patch fixes an issue where gcc doesn't generate
- some code properly.</para>
+ some code properly:</para>
<screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i
../&gcc-fold_const-patch;</userinput></screen>
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@
<para os="e1">GCC provides a <command>gccbug</command> script which
detects at
compile time whether mktemp is present, and hardcodes the result in a test.
- This will cause the script to fall back to using less random names for
- temporary files. We will be installing mktemp later, so the following sed
- will simulate its presence.</para>
+ If mktemp is not found, the script will fall back to using less
+ random names for temporary files. We will be installing mktemp
+ later, so the following sed will simulate its presence:</para>
<screen os="e2"><userinput>sed -i 's/@have_mktemp_command@/yes/'
gcc/gccbug.in</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml 2006-04-18 03:44:23 UTC (rev
1404)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml 2006-04-18 14:39:00 UTC (rev
1405)
@@ -54,17 +54,17 @@
Glibc autoconf tests would give false results and defeat the goal
of achieving a clean build.</para>
- <para os="c">The following patch removes the potential of localdef
- segfaulting:</para>
+ <para os="c">The following patch fixes an issue that can
+ cause <command>localdef</command> to segfault:</para>
<screen os="d"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i
../&glibc-localedef_segfault-patch;</userinput></screen>
<para os="s1">The following sed fixes a build issue with Glibc. This
will prevent nscd from trying to link to libraries that don't exist:</para>
-<screen os="s2"><userinput>cp nscd/Makefile{,.orig}
+<screen os="s2"><userinput>cp -v nscd/Makefile{,.orig}
sed -e "/nscd_stat.o: sysincludes = # nothing/d" nscd/Makefile.orig > \
-nscd/Makefile</userinput></screen>
+ nscd/Makefile</userinput></screen>
<para os="e">The Glibc documentation recommends building Glibc outside of
the
source directory in a dedicated build directory:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml 2006-04-18 03:44:23 UTC (rev
1404)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml 2006-04-18 14:39:00 UTC (rev
1405)
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
<para>Now we can remove this symlink. We also need to correct the
<command>
/usr/bin/ldd</command> script - if you look at this, you will see it
references
not only the 32-bit linker, but also /lib64 where it thinks the 64-bit
linker
- is. The following <command>sed</command> will correct this.</para>
+ is. The following <command>sed</command> will correct this:</para>
<screen><userinput>rm -v /lib/ld-linux.so.2
cp -v /usr/bin/ldd{,.bak}
Modified: trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tcl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tcl.xml 2006-04-18 03:44:23 UTC (rev
1404)
+++ trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tcl.xml 2006-04-18 14:39:00 UTC (rev
1405)
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
reassuring, if not essential, to know that the most important tools are
working properly.</para>
- <para os="c1">First, fix a syntax error in the configure script.</para>
+ <para os="c1">First, fix a syntax error in the configure script:</para>
<screen os="c2"><userinput>cd unix
sed -i "s/relid'/relid/" configure</userinput></screen>
@@ -56,7 +56,8 @@
<screen os="h"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
- <para os="i">Now we will install the TCL headers into /tools.</para>
+ <para os="i">Tcl's private headers files are needed for the next
+ package, Expect. Install them into /tools:</para>
<screen os="j"><userinput>make install-private-headers</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/mips/expect.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/mips/expect.xml 2006-04-18 03:44:23 UTC (rev
1404)
+++ trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/mips/expect.xml 2006-04-18 14:39:00 UTC (rev
1405)
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
href="../common/expect.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//[EMAIL PROTECTED]'b'])"/>
- <para os="p1">This patch updates config.guess and config.sub for MIPS
processors.</para>
+ <para os="p1">This patch updates config.guess and config.sub for MIPS
processors:</para>
<screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i
../&expect-mips_update-patch;</userinput></screen>
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