Dear all,

Thank you again for your helpful comments, on- and off list.

- I agree that the reference to examples was awkwardly phrased and simple is 
better:
"Some examples: http://geekfeminism.wikia.com/wiki/Timeline_of_incidents";

- Replacing 'secure' by 'confident' works well:
"For Organisers: Feel confident. Organisers know the standard to which the LGM 
community holds itself, and what to do when an issue arises."

- Having a list of resources, how-to's:
Let's extend the organisers guide with a participant guide, and add links etc. 
there. I think it is better to leave this document as is, and continue to work 
on a practical guide that complements it. We'll start to work on this soon.

+ some small typos fixed.

If there are any more concrete suggestions, please add them to this thread 
today. We'll publish the text to the LGM websites as of tomorrow.


Femke


On 22/05/14 03:36, Chris Lilley wrote:
Hello Julien,

Wednesday, May 21, 2014, 6:08:36 PM, you wrote:

If we need to link to examples of harrasment, maybe

"In case you think these things do not happen:"

could be changed to:

"If one needs examples:"

I like that wording.
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