Gorry Fairhurst has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-cose-merkle-tree-proofs-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I have no transport-related observations.

Please consider the following comments when revising this document:
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Introduction:
   COSE Receipts can include proves that a
   document is in a database (proof of inclusion)
- Is this correct: /proves/ ? is this /proofs/?
- or ... /can prove that a.../
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/increase burden for implementers/
- insert /the/ before /burden/?
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/which corresponds to the log/
- could be /that corresponds to the log/
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/It is recommended
   that implementations return a single boolean result for Receipt verification 
operations.../
- Please check, whether this ought to be a normative RECOMMENDED?
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and does /merkle tree/ have a capital 'M' or 'M' and 'T'?
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