Mattias Dahlberg wrote:
>>> First off in the slides that run during the package installation, The
>>> wording needs to change.
>>> "Thanks to have chosen Linux-Mandrake" Just doen't sound right.
>>> how about "Thank you for chosing Linux-Mandrake" or something
>>> along those lines.
>>
>> That should be...
>> "Thank you for choosing Linux-Mandrake"
>> ^
>
>
> Or how about "Thanks for choosing Linux-Mandrake", which I suspect is more
> along the lines of the original intention.
>
> Regards,
> Mattias
>
>
As a native English speaker I'd go with the previous option:
"Thank you for choosing Linux-Mandrake"
There are a few other English oddities, I'll try to record them when I
install at home this evening.
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