Author: kschenk
Date: Thu Mar 27 22:14:56 2014
New Revision: 1582506

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1582506
Log:
Some minor editing to make things more clear.

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/common/instructions.html

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/common/instructions.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/common/instructions.html?rev=1582506&r1=1582505&r2=1582506&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/common/instructions.html 
(original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/common/instructions.html Thu Mar 
27 22:14:56 2014
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ enables you to pause/resume the download
 
 <p>To download the most current version of Apache OpenOffice:</p>
 
-<ol>
+<ul>
   <li><p>Display <a href="http://www.openoffice.org/download/";>Download Apache 
OpenOffice</a>, and click on the large green
   download button displayed on the top of the web page.</p></li>
 
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ enables you to pause/resume the download
   page.</li>
 -->
 
-</ol>
+</ul>
 
 <p><b>NOTE: Much of the information that follows here can be found in the
 <a 
href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/OOOUSERS/Win-en-x86-Setup";>
@@ -320,17 +320,18 @@ exists, on your system.</p>
   <li><a href="http://www.openoffice.org/download/";>Download your favorite 
Linux version of Apache OpenOffice</a></li>
   <!--  <li>Review helpful information and installation options in the
   <a 
href="http://documentation.openoffice.org/setup_guide2/index.html#12";>Setup 
Guide.</a></li>-->
-  <li>Unpack the downloaded image to prepare for installation.<br />
+  <li>Unpack the downloaded package to prepare for installation.<br />
   The following command should work: <code>tar -xvzf "linux package 
name".tar.gz</code><br />
-  where "linux package name" is the beginning part of the archive you just 
downloaded.<br /><br />
+  where "linux package name" is the beginning part of the archive you just 
downloaded.<br />
   This will create an <b>installation directory</b>.<br />
   The name of the installation directory will likely be the language 
abbreviation for the install set, e.g., en-US.</li>
   <li>Add the install directory as a "local repository" for your GUI package 
manager if possible. This 
   will enable you to do a GUI install rather than command line.</li>
-  <li>Historically, OpenOffice has provided desktop integration packages for 
madriva, redhat, suse, and now
-  freedesktop. Many new desktop (window managers) like KDE4, Gnome3, and Unity 
now adhere to the freedsktop.org
-  standard for icon placement and mime-type definitions. You may want to 
install the freedesktop desktop 
-  integration package if you experience issues with your former desktop 
integration.</li>
+  <li>Desktop integration.<br>
+  Desktop integration for deb-based systems requires installation of one 
package.<br>
+  Historically, for rpm based systems, OpenOffice has provided desktop 
integration packages for madriva, redhat, suse, and now freedesktop. These 
packages are located in the <b>desktop-integration</b> subdirectory of the 
install directory.
+  <br>Many desktop window managers like KDE4, Gnome3, and Unity now adhere to 
the freedsktop.org
+  standard for icon placement and mime-type definitions. For this reason, you 
may want to install the freedesktop desktop integration package first before 
trying the others.</li>
 </ol>
 
 <h3 id="linux-rpm">Linux RPM-based Installation</h3>
@@ -343,9 +344,9 @@ exists, on your system.</p>
   By default, this will install Apache OpenOffice in your <code>/opt</code> 
directory.<br /><br />
   Alternatively, you can use a GUI package installer, reference the 
installation directory, and install all rpms at the top
   level. This may also aid you in determing any dependency problems if they 
exist.</li>
-  <li>Install the desktop integration features for your setup.
-  <code>cd</code> to <code>desktop-integration</code> in the installation 
directory,<br />
-  and, depending on your package manager/system, install the appropriate 
desktop interface using RPM.
+  <li>Install the desktop integration features for your setup.<br>
+  <code>cd</code> to <code>desktop-integration</code> (in the installation 
directory),<br />
+  and install an appropriate desktop interface using RPM. (Try the 
freedesktop-menus first.)<p>
   </li>
   <li>Finally, start up Apache OpenOffice 4.0.x to insure it's working.</li>
 </ol>
@@ -364,8 +365,8 @@ exists, on your system.</p>
   Alternatively, you can use a GUI package installer, reference the 
installation directory, and install all debs at the top
   level. This may also aid you in determing any dependency problems if they 
exist.</li>
   <li>Install the desktop integration features for your setup.<br />
-  <code>cd</code> to <code>desktop-integration</code> in the installation 
directory,<br />
-  and, depending on your package manager/system, install the appropriate 
desktop interface using dpkg.</li>
+  <code>cd</code> to <code>desktop-integration</code> (in the installation 
directory),<br />
+  and install the desktop intgration using dpkg.</li>
   <li>Finally, start up Apache OpenOffice 4.0.x to insure it's working.</li>
 </ol>
 
@@ -373,30 +374,22 @@ exists, on your system.</p>
 
 <h5>Apache OpenOffice provided packages</h5>
        
-<p>The Linux downloads provided on the Apache OpenOffice site (mirrors) are 
generic for either the RPM- or DEB-based package
-managers. If you have experience in directly installing these types of 
packages on your system, one of these types of
-installs should work for you. They are not specific to a particular Linux 
distribution.</p>
+<p>The Linux downloads provided on the Apache OpenOffice site (mirrors) are 
generic for either the RPM- or DEB-based package managers. If you have 
experience in directly installing these types of packages on your system, one 
of these types of installs should work for you. They are not specific to a 
particular Linux distribution.</p>
 
 <h5>Apache OpenOffice from Linux distros</h5>
-<p>Many Linux distributions now include a version of Apache OpenOffice in 
their own native package manager format (.rpm,
-.deb, etc.) either from their own repositories or community repositories which 
they support. These packages have been built
-and are supported by the distributions' own teams or community members, not by 
Apache OpenOffice. Some distributions have
-strict policies around licensing, which means they have chosen to disable 
parts of Apache OpenOffice which rely on software
-which does not meet their criteria (e.g. the Fedora RPMs have disabled the 
parts of Apache OpenOffice which require
-Java).</p>
+<p>Some Linux distributions now include a version of Apache OpenOffice in 
their own native package manager format (.rpm, .deb, etc.) either from their 
own repositories or community repositories which they support. These packages 
have been built and are supported by the distributions' own teams or community 
members, not by Apache OpenOffice. Some distributions have strict policies 
around licensing, which means they have chosen to disable parts of Apache 
OpenOffice which rely on software which does not meet their criteria. </p>
 
 <p><b>Note:</b>
-Please check carefully before using a third-party build that it does actually 
include all the parts of Apache OpenOffice that
-you will require. Replacing a 'native' distribution build with the full Apache 
OpenOffice original build can be tricky, but
-can usually be successfully accomplished by completely removing the existing 
'native' install.</p>
+Please check carefully before using a third-party build that it does actually 
include all the parts of Apache OpenOffice that you will require. Replacing a 
'native' distribution build with the full Apache OpenOffice original build can 
be tricky, but can usually be successfully accomplished by completely removing 
the existing 'native' install.</p>
 
 <h5>Useful sites for Linux installation</h5>
 <p>The following links are additional resources for installing Apache 
OpenOffice on Linux by other parties. We hope you
-    find them useful.
+    find them useful. 
     <ul>
         <li><a 
href="http://sourceforge.net/projects/apacheoo-deb/files/debian/";>Unofficial 
debian repository</a></li>
         <li><a 
href="http://www.if-not-true-then-false.com/2010/install-openoffice-org-on-fedora-centos-red-hat-rhel/";>Installing
 Apache OpenOffice on Fedora</a></li>
         <li><a 
href="http://www.liberiangeek.net/2013/08/apache-openoffice-4-0-releasedheres-how-to-install-it-in-ubuntu/";>How
 to Install on Ubuntu</a></li>
+        <li><a 
href="http://www.itzgeek.com/how-tos/linux/linux-mint-how-tos/install-apache-openoffice-4-on-linux-mint-15.html#axzz2xCWJdVcA";>Install
 Apache OpenOffice on Linux Mint 15</a>
             
         
     </ul>


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