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commit 22174b44ebe5dfbb59f48ae3a386207706995f78
Author: Elliotte Rusty Harold <elh...@users.noreply.github.com>
AuthorDate: Thu Jun 8 07:01:42 2023 -0400

    simplify language
---
 content/apt/book/index.apt | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/apt/book/index.apt b/content/apt/book/index.apt
index f07141f..0fe35ae 100644
--- a/content/apt/book/index.apt
+++ b/content/apt/book/index.apt
@@ -29,8 +29,7 @@
 
 Introduction
 
- Doxia allows you to write books like user manuals and guides in any format 
supported by Doxia. Combined with the
- Doxia Book Maven you are able to include the manuals directly in your 
generated site with links to the off-line
+ Doxia allows you to write books like user manuals and guides in any format 
supported by Doxia. You can include the manuals directly in your generated site 
with links to the off-line
  friendly formats like XDoc, PDF, RTF and LaTeX.
 
  The Xdoc output which has been rendered into this site can be viewed 
{{{../doxia-example-book/index.html}here}}.
@@ -40,12 +39,12 @@ Introduction
 
 * How It Works
 
- The only thing you need in addition to the content files itself is a simple 
book descriptor which is used to specify
+ The only thing you need in addition to the content files is a simple book 
descriptor which specifies
  the ordering of the sections and the names for the chapters.
 
 * Creating a Book Descriptor
 
- An XML file is used to describe the layout of the book.
+ An XML file describes the layout of the book.
 
  A sample is given below:
 

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