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commit fd9f12b41ed7b91750932e09d6786496466de9cf
Author: Nikshep Svn <nikshep...@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: Fri Dec 11 02:25:10 2020 -0500
Proofread README
Made the README more legible for native english speakers
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README.md | 12 ++++++------
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index bc6882e..5105b22 100644
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+++ b/README.md
@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@ Apache Kylin
> Extreme OLAP Engine for Big Data
-Apache Kylin is an open source Distributed Analytics Engine, contributed by
eBay Inc., provides SQL interface and multi-dimensional analysis (OLAP) on
Hadoop supporting extremely large datasets.
+Apache Kylin is an open source Distributed Analytics Engine, contributed by
eBay Inc., it provides a SQL interface and multi-dimensional analysis (OLAP) on
Hadoop with support for extremely large datasets.
For more details, see the website
[http://kylin.apache.org](http://kylin.apache.org), Chinese
version:[http://kylin.apache.org/cn/](http://kylin.apache.org/cn/).
-Get start kylin in 5 min with Docker
+Get started with Kylin in 5 minutes with Docker
=============
-In order to allow users to try Kylin easily, we provide Kylin’s docker image.
+In order to allow users to try Kylin easily, we provide a docker image for
Kylin.
-Just run codes below in your terminal. After 3~5 mins, you can access Kylin
WebUI [http://127.0.0.1:7070/kylin/login](http://127.0.0.1:7070/kylin/login) in
your browser.
+Just run the following commands in your terminal. After 3~5 mins, you can
access Kylin WebUI
[http://127.0.0.1:7070/kylin/login](http://127.0.0.1:7070/kylin/login) in your
browser.
1. pull docker image
```bash
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ docker run -d \
--name apache-kylin-standalone \
apachekylin/apache-kylin-standalone:3.1.0
```
-You can get more detail about this docker image in [kylin
website](http://kylin.apache.org/docs/install/kylin_docker.html)
+You can learn more about this docker image on Kylin's
[website](http://kylin.apache.org/docs/install/kylin_docker.html)
Documentation
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Chinese version:
[http://kylin.apache.org/cn/docs/](http://kylin.apache.org/cn/d
Get Help
============
-The fastest way to get response from our developers is to send email to our
mail list <d...@kylin.apache.org>,
+The fastest way to get response from our developers is to send an email to our
mail list <d...@kylin.apache.org>,
and remember to subscribe our mail list via <dev-subscr...@kylin.apache.org>
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