address review comments

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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 6606b980368a2e8d24efc74a64a0dc387ab99210
Parents: 7f0115f
Author: Dale LaBossiere <dlab...@us.ibm.com>
Authored: Wed Dec 13 08:54:33 2017 -0500
Committer: Dale LaBossiere <dlab...@us.ibm.com>
Committed: Wed Dec 13 08:54:33 2017 -0500

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@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Applications are developed using a functional flow API to 
define operations on d
 
 You can develop Edgent applications using an IDE of your choice. 
 
-Generally, mechanisms for deploying an Edgent Application to a device are 
beyond the scope of Edgent; they are often device specific or may be defined by 
an enterprise IoT system.  To deploy an Edgent application to a device like a 
Raspberry Pi, you could just FTP the application to the device and modify the 
device to start the application upon startup or on command.   See [Edgent 
Application Development](application-development).
+Generally, mechanisms for deploying an Edgent application to a device are 
beyond the scope of Edgent; they are often device specific or may be defined by 
an enterprise IoT system.  To deploy an Edgent application to a device like a 
Raspberry Pi, you could just FTP the application to the device and modify the 
device to start the application upon startup or on command.   See [Edgent 
application Development](application-development).
 
 ## What environments does Apache Edgent support?
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Currently, Edgent provides APIs and runtime for Java and 
Android. Support for ad
 
 ## What type of analytics can be done with Apache Edgent?
 
-The core Edgent APIs makes it easy to incorporate any analytics you want into 
the stream processing graph. Its trivial to create windows and trigger 
aggregation functions you supply. It's trivial to specify whatever filtering 
and transformation functions you want to supply. The functions you supply can 
use existing libraries.
+The core Edgent APIs make it easy to incorporate any analytics you want into 
the stream processing graph. It's trivial to create windows and trigger 
aggregation functions you supply. It's trivial to specify whatever filtering 
and transformation functions you want to supply. The functions you supply can 
use existing libraries.
 
 Edgent comes with some initial analytics for aggregation and filtering that 
you may find useful. It uses Apache Common Math to provide simple analytics 
aimed at device sensors. In the future, Edgent will include more analytics, 
either exposing more functionality from Apache Common Math, other libraries or 
hand-coded analytics.
 
@@ -43,11 +43,11 @@ No, Edgent does not come with a library for accessing a 
device's sensors.  The s
 
 ## What centralized streaming analytic systems does Apache Edgent support?
 
-Edgent applications can publish and subscribe to message systems like MQTT or 
Kafka, or IoT Hubs like IBM Watson IoT Platform.  Centralized streaming 
analytic systems can do likewise to then consume Edgent application events and 
data, as well as control an Edgent application.  The centralized streaming 
analytic system could be Apache Spark, Apache Storm, Flink and samza, IBM 
Streams (on-premises or IBM Streaming Analytics on Bluemix), or any custom 
application of your choice.
+Edgent applications can publish and subscribe to message systems like MQTT or 
Kafka, or IoT Hubs like IBM Watson IoT Platform.  Centralized streaming 
analytic systems can do likewise to then consume Edgent application events and 
data, as well as control an Edgent application.  The centralized streaming 
analytic system could be Apache Spark, Apache Storm, Flink and Samza, IBM 
Streams (on-premises or IBM Streaming Analytics on Bluemix), or any custom 
application of your choice.
 
 ## Is there a distributed version of Edgent?
 
-The short answer is that a single Edgent Application's topologies all run in 
the same local JVM.  
+The short answer is that a single Edgent application's topologies all run in 
the same local JVM.  
 
 But sometimes this question is really asking "Can separate Edgent topologies 
communicate with each other?" and the answer to that is YES!
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ Edgent is designed for the edge. It has a small footprint, 
suitable for running
 
 ## Why do I need Apache Edgent, rather than coding the complete application 
myself?
 
-Edgent is designed to accellerate your development of edge analytic 
applications - to make you more productive! Edgent provides a simple yet 
powerful consistent data model (streams and windows) and provides useful 
functionality, such as aggregations, joins, and connectors. Using Edgent lets 
you to take advantage of this functionality, allowing you to focus on your 
application needs.  
+Edgent is designed to accelerate your development of edge analytic 
applications - to make you more productive! Edgent provides a simple yet 
powerful consistent data model (streams and windows) and provides useful 
functionality, such as aggregations, joins, and connectors. Using Edgent lets 
you to take advantage of this functionality, allowing you to focus on your 
application needs.  
 
 Check out [The Power of Edgent](power-of-edgent) to get a better appreciation 
of how Edgent can help you.
 

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-edgent-website/blob/6606b980/site/docs/power-of-edgent.md
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@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: The Power of Apache Edgent
 ---
 
-Edgent is designed to accellerate your development of event driven flow-graph
+Edgent is designed to accelerate your development of event driven flow-graph
 style analytic applications running on edge devices.  This is achieved by
 Edgent's combination of API, connectors, basic analytics, utilities, and 
openness!
 
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ Or ingest a command's stdout/err?
 ```
 
 
-Want to sink to a log via slf4j or another logging system?  Just do it!
+Want to sink to a log via SLF4J or another logging system?  Just do it!
 
 ```java
     import org.slf4j.Logger;

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