2011/4/26 C. Boemann <c...@boemann.dk>: > On Tuesday 26 April 2011 18:20:49 Jaroslaw Staniek wrote: >> On 26 April 2011 16:06, Inge Wallin <i...@lysator.liu.se> wrote: >> > On Tuesday, April 26, 2011 16:00:52 Inge Wallin wrote: >> >> Here is a first draft of the announcement of snapshot 1. I have already >> >> had some feedback from Cyrille that I incorporated. >> >> >> >> Please comment on the overall structure (is this what we want to focus >> >> on?) as well as the actual content. Also remember that this is a first >> >> draft that will be polished over the next few days. >> >> >> >> When we have the screenshots and visual tour on the website, I will also >> >> add references to those. >> >> >> >> -Inge >> > >> > Based on feedback from my first draft, I have embellished it a bit. Here >> > is a longer version. :-P >> >> Nice work! >> First, one thing: I'd like to propose to have two messages: to users >> and developers. Only the latter would mention GUI/engine separation >> and stuff like that. If we start doing the separation for any >> announcement, we can escape from the 'geek' area. >> Simple test: just give the text to read to your family and see what's >> a like black magic to them, then improve incrementally. > Very good point. 100% agree
+1. Apart from that I think it's very good. I'd s/calligra suite/Calligra Suite/ on line 2 though. Elvis > _______________________________________________ > calligra-devel mailing list > calligra-devel@kde.org > https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/calligra-devel > _______________________________________________ calligra-devel mailing list calligra-devel@kde.org https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/calligra-devel
