At 05:49 PM 5/9/01 +1000, you wrote:
>Hi very new to perl... am getting some books asap.

Looks like Lincoln Stein's "Network Programming with Perl" would be apposite...

>I am writing a script to create named.conf records from  a single field 
>text file
>
>eg, domain.fle
>domain1.com
>domain2.net
>domain3.org
>
>and then create a named.conf entry from;
>
>$namedconf="/etc/namedb/named.conf" ;
>$namednow="/etc/namedb/named.conf.$now" ;
>$namedtmp="/etc/namedb/named.conf.tmp" ;
>
>unless (-e $namedconf) { die "$namedconf does not exist!" }

You'll probably want to put a \n in that die.

>open (NAMEDNOW, "> $namednow") || die "Cannot open $namedtmp for 
>writing\n\n" ;

Er, the file in the die is not the same as the one in the open...

>open (NAMED, $namedconf) || die "Cannot open $namedconf for reading\n\n" ;
>Lock::wlock(NAMED);
>
>while (<NAMED>) {
>if ((/nextprimary/) && ($domaintype eq "primary")) {
>print NAMEDNOW <<ENUF;
>
>zone "$domainname" {
>         type master;
>         allow-query { any; } ;
>         file "zones/$domainname";
>};
>
>ENUF
>
>Newbie please be gentle...

You're asking for a critique?  The above code is incomplete, so that's hard 
to do.  I don't see a -w/use warnings or use strict in there, so those 
would be essential to add.  Also, the script at least as it appeared to me 
didn't have indentation inside blocks; pretty code layout is far more 
important than most people think.

Otherwise, style and usage are fine.  I'm not familiar with the Lock module 
you appear to be using, and I don't see it on CPAN.

--
Peter Scott
Pacific Systems Design Technologies
http://www.perldebugged.com

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