+      --aclocal-path=PATHS  colon-separated paths to search for third-party
+                              local files

Maybe "colon-separated list of directories".
Or "colon-separated path".

    +@item --aclocal-path=@var{dir}

@var{dir} -> @var{path}

    +@opindex --aclocal-path
    +Look for local third-party macro files (and the special @file{dirlist}
    +file) in @var{dir} instead of in the installation directory.  This is

in @var{dir} -> along @var{path} (a colon-separated list of directories)

    +typically used for building against local sysroots.

Can we link to somewhere that explains what this means?
Or at least have a parenthetical sentence of explanation?

    +@vindex ACLOCAL_PATH
    +The environment variable @env{ACLOCAL_PATH} provides another way to
    +set the directory containing local third-party macro files.  

s/directory/search path for directories/

    ... However
    +@option{--aclocal-path} takes precedence over it.

It's not really "However". Also, it needs to be clear that if
--aclocal-path is specified. How about:

 This variable is ignored if the @{--ac-local-path} option is specified.

    -@subsubheading Modifying the Macro Search Path: @file{ACLOCAL_PATH}
    +@subsubheading Modifying the Macro Search Path: @option{--aclocal-path}

It seems you've sometimes replaced ACLOCAL_PATH with --aclocal-path.
But ACLOCAL_PATH still exists. So it seems like both should be
mentioned.  You do that in some places, but didn't seem like all.

Thanks,
Karl

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