Ok.  What is left is the issue around inclusive language and the copyright issue.  Both need to be taken seriously.  I will address the inclusive language and one other issue in this message.  See a follow-up on the copyright issue.

On the use of the word "Native", because MULPI makes use of this language, and because there is a note as to why the term is used, I think it's okay in this instance, and would request no additional changes.

That said, I do note two issues I would like the authors to address at this time:

 * the 3.1 links are broken in the references.
 * at least some 4.0 docs (MULPI in particular) have since issued, and
   they should be reviewed prior to this document's publication.  It's
   not like CableLabs publishes a new version every day, and presumably
   they would appreciate us using their latest, absent good cause.

I will return to the copyright issue in a separate message.

Eliot
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