Hi Samuel,

Thank you for your reply!

Sincerely,
Sarah Tarrant
RFC Production Center

> On Mar 18, 2026, at 4:07 AM, Samuel Sidor (ssidor) <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sarah,
> 
> Please find responses inline marked with <S>.
> 
> Regards,
> Samuel
> 
> From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
> Date: Tuesday, 17 March 2026 at 20:32
> To: Samuel Sidor (ssidor) <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
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> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
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> Subject: Document intake questions about 
> <draft-ietf-pce-circuit-style-pcep-extensions-16>
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> <S> The abstract is still accurate. I believe that no other updates are 
> required to Authors’ Addresses, Contributors or Acknowledgments sections.
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> <S> For “Circuit Style” - we changed naming a few times between 
> "Circuit-Style" and "Circuit Style". The document should use “Circuit Style” 
> to follow spring draft draft-ietf-spring-cs-sr-policy. 
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> <S> No outdated references found.
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> <S> I believe that only only section 6 (tracking implementations) needs to be 
> dropped.
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> <S> Current document is referring to:
> draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-04.txt  
> draft-ietf-spring-cs-sr-policy-17.txt 
> from same cluster.
> 
> Besides note about naming of Circuit style policies described in response for 
> question 2), I don’t think that there is any repeated text or other strict 
> dependency.
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> 6) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing this
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> <S> Nothing specific.
> 
> > On Mar 17, 2026, at 2:27 PM, [email protected] wrote:
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