Hello Sarah,

Thank you for your message, please find my answer to questions below inline:

Best regards,
Zhuoyao


-----Original Message-----
From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
Sent: Friday, March 13, 2026 2:03 PM
To: Zhuoyao Lin <[email protected]>; [email protected]; 
[email protected]
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; 
[email protected]; [email protected]
Subject: Re: Document intake questions about 
<draft-ietf-netconf-yang-library-augmentedby-17>

Hi Author(s),

This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions below before 
continuing with the editing process for this document. 

Thank you,
Sarah Tarrant
RFC Production Center

> On Mar 2, 2026, at 4:07 PM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Author(s),
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> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during 
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> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?

Yes

> * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments 
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Yes

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The terminology from [RFC8525] is used in this document
The term "client" is used as defined in [RFC6241] for NETCONF and [RFC8040] for 
RESTCONF.
The term "YANG schema tree" is used as defined in Section 3 of [RFC7950]
The term Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) is used as defined in 
[RFC8342]
Tree diagrams in this document use the notations defined in [RFC8340]


> * Is there a pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms? (e.g., 
> field names should have initial capitalization; parameter names should 
> be in double quotes; <tt/> should be used for token names; etc.)
> 


‘YANG’ should be capitalized when used in ‘YANG module’ ‘YANG library’ ‘YANG 
schema’ etc..


> 
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> References section with the following in mind. Note that we will 
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> * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current 
> RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322 (RFC 
> Style Guide).


Please do not updated reference to RFC7895 which is updated by RFC8525(also 
used in this document) as we need both of them.


> 
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No

> * Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked 
> as such (e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942)).

Yes. 
1) Note in discussion Venues 
2) Section 6. Implementation Status
3 ) Appendix B


> * Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be 
> edited the same way?

No

> 
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They are only used where they have been cited.

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Source code is validate. But the section that cited source code is to be 
removed, which is section 6 Implementation Status.

> 
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> errata and confirm whether they have been addressed in this document 
> or are not relevant:
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> * RFC 8525 (https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc8525)

It is not relevant.

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No

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No

> 
> 
> 10) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while 
> editing this document?

There are following places that require update when RFC number is assigned for 
this document:
1)      In section 4.1.2 in the ‘revision 2025-05-28’, the reference should be 
updated with the assigned RFC number.
2)      In Section 8 IANA Considerations, the reference should be updated with 
the assigned RFC number.

> 
>> On Mar 2, 2026, at 4:02 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>> 
>> Author(s),
>> 
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