Hi Sarah,

Thanks very much!

Please see some responses along your email with [jorge].

Thanks.
Jorge

From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, March 10, 2026 at 9:56 AM
To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
[email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
[email protected] <[email protected]>, Adam 1. Simpson (Nokia) 
<[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, Gunter van de Velde 
(Nokia) <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>
Subject: Document intake questions about 
<draft-ietf-bess-evpn-ipvpn-interworking-18>


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[jorge] noted. No updates really.


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1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during Last 
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please review the current version of the document:

* Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
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sections current?

[jorge] yes, abstract still accurate and those sections current.


2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing your
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* Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document,
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(e.g., "This document's terminology should match DNS terminology in
RFC 9499." or "This document uses the style info at
<https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fhttpwg.org%2Fadmin%2Feditors%2Fstyle-guide&data=05%7C02%7Cjorge.rabadan%40nokia.com%7Cda74e062aba64aa6c94e08de7ec5f796%7C5d4717519675428d917b70f44f9630b0%7C0%7C0%7C639087585914754589%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=DSg1fA82c%2B7HpU5UpGH%2FfkzH6nhRQQks89DE8eKZ9%2FA%3D&reserved=0>.<https://httpwg.org/admin/editors/style-guide>”).

[jorge] in general, terminology should follow the one used in RC7432, 8365, 
9136.

* Is there a general pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms that
editors can follow (e.g., "Field names should have initial capitalization."
or  "Parameter names should be in double quotes." or "<tt/> should be used
for token names." etc.)?

[jorge] capitalization should be kept as is. In case of inconsistency, we can 
discuss.


3) Please carefully review the entries and their URLs in the
References section with the following in mind. Note that we will
update as follows unless we hear otherwise at this time:

* References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current
RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322
(RFC Style Guide).

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[jorge] the references section should be correct.


4) Is there any text that requires special handling? For example:
* Are there any sections that were contentious when the document was drafted?
* Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked as such
(e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942)).
* Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be edited
the same way?

[jorge] no contentious sections in the current text, no sections to be removed. 
Terminology is used throughout the document, so editing should be consistent. 
But nothing really especial.


5) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing this
document?

[jorge] not that I can think of.

> On Mar 10, 2026, at 11:50 AM, [email protected] wrote:
>
> The document draft-ietf-bess-evpn-ipvpn-interworking-18 has
> changed from MISSREF*A*R(1G) state to EDIT*A state. We thought you'd like to 
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