Hi Xuesong,

Thank you for double-checking, as we indeed did not get your approval email. We 
have now marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (see 
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> On Mar 5, 2026, at 4:10 AM, Xuesong Geng <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sarah,
> 
> Outlook notified me that my previous email may not have been delivered 
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> reference.
> 
> Please let me know if you still have any issues receiving it.
> 
> Best regards,
> Xuesong
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Xuesong Geng 
> Sent: Thursday, March 5, 2026 6:07 PM
> To: 'Sarah Tarrant' <[email protected]>; Balázs Varga A 
> <[email protected]>
> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; Mach Chen 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
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> <draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-15> for your review
> 
> Hi Balaz and Sarah,
> 
> Thanks a lot for helping with the progress of the document! 
> I confirm that I have reviewed the document and approve it for publication. 
> Let me know if anything further is needed from my side.
> 
> Best
> Xuesong
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
> Sent: Tuesday, March 3, 2026 10:51 PM
> To: Balázs Varga A <[email protected]>
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> <[email protected]>; Mach Chen <[email protected]>; [email protected]; 
> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
> [email protected]; [email protected]
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9938 
> <draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-15> for your review
> 
> Hi Balázs,
> 
> Thank you for clarifying! We have updated the document accordingly and marked 
> your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (see 
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> 
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>> On Mar 3, 2026, at 1:46 AM, Balázs Varga A <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Sarah,
>> 
>> Thanks for the update.
>> 
>> Regarding the follow-up question: Sorry my mistake. I have misread and 
>> looked for reference in RFC9055. Correct change is as per your 
>> original proposal.
>> 
>> Current:
>>   In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane
>>   have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those requirements
>>   is provided in Section 2.4.
>> NEW:
>>   In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane
>>   have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those requirements
>>   is provided in Section 2.3 of this document.
>> 
>> With this change I approve this RFC for publication.
>> 
>> Thanks & Cheers
>> Bala'zs
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
>> Sent: Monday, March 2, 2026 9:48 PM
>> To: Balázs Varga A <[email protected]>
>> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>> [email protected]; [email protected]
>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9938
>> <draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-15> for your review
>> 
>> [Ritkán kap e-maileket [email protected]. Miért fontos ez 
>> a https://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification ]
>> 
>> Hi Balázs,
>> 
>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly.
>> 
>> We have one followup question, regarding:
>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFC 9055 and this document do not contain 
>>>> "Section 2.4". Please clarify if Section 2.3 of this document was perhaps 
>>>> intended.
>>>> 
>>>> Current:
>>>> In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane 
>>>> have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those 
>>>> requirements  is provided in Section 2.4.
>>>> 
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>> In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane 
>>>> have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those 
>>>> requirements  is provided in Section 2.3 of this document.
>>>> -->
>>> The correct reference is "Section 5.2.5"
>>> NEW:
>>> In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane 
>>> have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those requirements 
>>> is provided in Section 5.2.5 of this document.
>> 
>> Could you take another look at which section this is referring to? We don't 
>> believe there is a Section 5.2.2 in this document. Perhaps also provide the 
>> section title?
>> 
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>> 
>>> On Mar 2, 2026, at 9:21 AM, Balázs Varga A 
>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear Sarah and Karen,
>>> With the changes below: I approve this RFC for publication.
>>> Many thanks
>>> Bala'zs
>>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Balázs Varga A
>>> Sent: Monday, March 2, 2026 4:17 PM
>>> To: '[email protected]' <[email protected]>; 
>>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>>> [email protected]
>>> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>>> [email protected]; [email protected]
>>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9938
>>> <draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-15> for your review
>>> 
>>> Dear Sarah and Karen,
>>> Please, find resolutions inline after the "-->" mark.
>>> Many thanks for your efforts
>>> Bala'zs
>>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: [email protected] <[email protected]>
>>> Sent: Saturday, February 21, 2026 2:54 AM
>>> To: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>>> Balázs Varga A <[email protected]>; [email protected]
>>> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>>> [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
>>> [email protected]
>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9938
>>> <draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-15> for your review
>>> 
>>> Authors,
>>> 
>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
>>> the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>>> 
>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in the 
>>> title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search.
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> Proposed keywords: DetNet, Controller plane, SDN
>>> 
>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We're having trouble understanding the parentheses in this 
>>> sentence. Is the "set of documents" referring to A) all of the subsequently 
>>> listed RFCs or B) just RFC 8938? Please let us know how we may update for 
>>> clarity.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> The DetNet data plane is defined in a set of documents that are 
>>> anchored by the DetNet data plane framework [RFC8938] (as well as the 
>>> associated DetNet MPLS defined in [RFC8964], the DetNet IP defined in 
>>> [RFC8939], and other data plane specifications defined in [RFC9023], 
>>> [RFC9024], [RFC9025], [RFC9037], and [RFC9056]).
>>> 
>>> Perhaps A:
>>> The DetNet data plane is defined in a set of documents that are 
>>> anchored by the DetNet data plane framework [RFC8938], which includes 
>>> the associated DetNet MPLS defined in [RFC8964], the  DetNet IP 
>>> defined in [RFC8939], and other data plane specifications  defined in 
>>> [RFC9023], [RFC9024], [RFC9025], [RFC9037], and  [RFC9056].
>>> 
>>> or
>>> Perhaps B:
>>> The DetNet data plane is defined in the DetNet data plane framework 
>>> [RFC8938] (and is further explained in the associated DetNet MPLS 
>>> [RFC8964], the DetNet IP [RFC8939], and other data plane 
>>> specifications [RFC9023] [RFC9024] [RFC9025] [RFC9037] [RFC9056]).
>>> -->
>>> Please, go with Version-B. Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFC 9055 and this document do not contain 
>>> "Section 2.4". Please clarify if Section 2.3 of this document was perhaps 
>>> intended.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane 
>>> have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those requirements 
>>> is provided in Section 2.4.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane 
>>> have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those requirements 
>>> is provided in Section 2.3 of this document.
>>> -->
>>> The correct reference is "Section 5.2.5"
>>> NEW:
>>> In addition, security requirements for the DetNet Controller Plane 
>>> have been discussed in [RFC9055], and a summary of those requirements 
>>> is provided in Section 5.2.5 of this document.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We note "SDN/Fully Centralized" vs. "fully 
>>> SDN/centralized". May we remove the slashes and rephrase using "and" for 
>>> clarity as shown below? Please let us know if this retains the intended 
>>> meaning or if you prefer otherwise.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 3.2.  SDN/Fully Centralized Control Plane
>>> 
>>> In the fully SDN/centralized configuration model, flow/UNI 
>>> information is transmitted from a centralized user controller or from 
>>> applications via an API/ northbound interface to a centralized 
>>> controller.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> 3.2.  SDN and Fully Centralized Control Plane
>>> 
>>> In the SDN and fully centralized configuration model, both flow and 
>>> UNI information can be transmitted from a centralized user controller 
>>> or from other applications, via an API or northbound interface, to a 
>>> centralized controller.
>>> -->
>>> SDN is an example of the fully centralized method. Finetuned version of 
>>> your proposal is below:
>>> NEW:
>>> 3.2.  Fully Centralized Control Plane  In the fully centralized 
>>> configuration model (e.g., using an SDN controller), both flow and 
>>> UNI information can be transmitted from a centralized user controller 
>>> or from other applications, via an API or northbound interface, to a 
>>> centralized controller.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 5) <!--[rfced] How may we clarify/expand the first mention of "PCE-CC"?
>>> Perhaps "PCE-based central controller (PCE-CC)"?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> Network node configurations for DetNet flows are performed by the 
>>> controller using a protocol such as NETCONF [RFC6241], YANG [RFC6020] 
>>> [RFC7950], DetNet YANG [RFC9633], or PCE-CC [RFC8283].
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> Network node configurations for DetNet flows are performed by the 
>>> controller using a protocol such as NETCONF [RFC6241], YANG [RFC6020] 
>>> [RFC7950], DetNet YANG [RFC9633], or a PCE-based central controller 
>>> (PCE-CC) [RFC8283].
>>> -->
>>> Good suggestion. Please, change as per your proposal. Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 6) <!--[rfced] FYI: Per RFC 9016, we updated "Maximum Packets Per Interval" 
>>> and "Maximum Payload Size" to "MaxPacketsPerInterval"
>>> and "MaxPayloadSize", respectively. Please let us know if this is incorrect.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> A DetNet flow is characterized with a traffic specification as 
>>> defined in [RFC9016], including attributes such as Interval,  Maximum 
>>> Packets Per Interval, and Maximum Payload Size.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> A DetNet flow is characterized with a traffic specification as 
>>> defined in [RFC9016], including attributes such as Interval, 
>>> MaxPacketsPerInterval, and MaxPayloadSize.
>>> -->
>>> Good suggestion. Please, change as per your proposal. Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Are the parentheses around "member" essential to the 
>>> sentence, or may we remove them?
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> Mapping of DetNet (member) flows to explicit path segments has to be 
>>> ensured as well.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> Mapping of DetNet member flows to explicit path segments has to be 
>>> ensured as well.
>>> -->
>>> DetNet member flow is specific term used in DetNet.
>>> NEW:
>>> Mapping of DetNet flows or DetNet member flows to explicit path 
>>> segments has to be  ensured as well.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 8) <!--[rfced] Please clarify if "BGP/MPLS-based" means "BGP and 
>>> MPLS-based" (option A) or "BGP-based and MPLS-based" (option B) in the 
>>> following.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> The dynamic signaling protocols most commonly used for label 
>>> distribution are LDP [RFC5036], RSVP-TE [RFC4875], and BGP [RFC8277] 
>>> (which enables BGP/MPLS-based Layer 3 VPNs [RFC4384], Layer 2 VPNs 
>>> [RFC4664], and EVPNs [RFC7432]).
>>> 
>>> Perhaps A:
>>> The dynamic signaling protocols most commonly used for label 
>>> distribution are LDP [RFC5036], RSVP-TE [RFC4875], and BGP [RFC8277] 
>>> (which enables BGP and MPLS-based Layer 3 VPNs [RFC4384], Layer 2 
>>> VPNs  [RFC4664], and EVPNs [RFC7432]).
>>> 
>>> or
>>> Perhaps B:
>>> The dynamic signaling protocols most commonly used for label 
>>> distribution are LDP [RFC5036], RSVP-TE [RFC4875], and BGP [RFC8277] 
>>> (which enables BGP-/MPLS-based Layer 3 VPNs [RFC4384], Layer 2 VPNs 
>>> [RFC4664], and EVPNs [RFC7432]).
>>> -->
>>> The term intends to refer to VPNs established in MPLS networks using BGP 
>>> protocol.
>>> NEW:
>>> The dynamic signaling protocols most commonly used for label 
>>> distribution are LDP [RFC5036], RSVP-TE [RFC4875], and BGP [RFC8277] 
>>> (which enables BGP-based MPLS Layer 3 VPNs [RFC4384], Layer 2 VPNs 
>>> [RFC4664], and EVPNs [RFC7432]).
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.4.2: This section states that it will "discuss 
>>> possible protocol extensions to existing IP routing protocols"; however, it 
>>> does not appear to do that. Please review and let us know if content should 
>>> be added to this section or if it should be rephrased for clarity.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> For the purposes of this document, "traditional IP" is defined as IP 
>>> without the use of segment routing (see Section 4.4.3 for a 
>>> discussion of IP with segment routing).  This section will discuss 
>>> possible protocol extensions to existing IP routing protocols.  It 
>>> should be noted that a DetNet IP data plane [RFC8939] is simpler than 
>>> a DetNet MPLS data plane [RFC8964] and doesn't support PREOF, so only 
>>> one path per flow or flow aggregate is required.
>>> -->
>>> Thanks for pointing out this issue. I have changed the sentence and moved 
>>> to the end of the paragraph.
>>> NEW:
>>> For the purposes of this document, "traditional IP" is defined as IP 
>>> without the use of segment routing (see Section 4.4.3 for a 
>>> discussion of IP with segment routing).  It should be noted that a 
>>> DetNet IP data plane [RFC8939] is simpler than  a DetNet MPLS data 
>>> plane [RFC8964] and doesn't support PREOF, so only  one path per flow 
>>> or flow aggregate is required. Therefore,  possible protocol extensions are 
>>> expected to be limited e.g., to existing IP routing protocols.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We're having trouble parsing how "one ... controller plane 
>>> function" can "collaborate". How may we update for clarity?
>>> Note that we updated the capitalization of the expansions for CPF and FME 
>>> to match RFC 8655.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> When there are multiple domains involved, one or multiple Controller 
>>> Plane Functions (CPFs) would have to collaborate to implement the 
>>> requests received from the Flow Management Entity (FME) [RFC8655] as 
>>> per-flow, per-hop behaviors installed in the DetNet nodes for each 
>>> individual flow.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps A:
>>> When there are multiple domains involved, multiple Controller  Plane 
>>> Functions (CPFs) would have to collaborate to implement the  requests 
>>> received from the Flow Management Entity (FME) [RFC8655] as per-flow, 
>>> per-hop behaviors installed in the DetNet nodes for each individual 
>>> flow.
>>> 
>>> or
>>> Perhaps B:
>>> When there are multiple domains involved, one Controller Plane 
>>> Function (CPF) (or multiple CPFs in collaboration) would have to 
>>> implement the requests received from the Flow Management Entity
>>> (FME) [RFC8655] as per-flow, per-hop behaviors installed in the 
>>> DetNet nodes for each individual flow.
>>> -->
>>> Please, go with Version-A. Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We rephrased the following text to expand "RAW" and to 
>>> avoid hyphenating "RAW-specific functions". Please let us know if this 
>>> retains the intended meaning.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> Furthermore, in the case of wireless domains, the per-domain RAW 
>>> [I-D.ietf-raw-architecture] specific functions like the PLR (Point of 
>>> Local Repairs have to be also considered, e.g., in addition to the 
>>> PCEs.
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> Furthermore, in the case of wireless domains, per-domain functions 
>>> specific to Reliable and Available Wireless (RAW) [RAW-ARCH], such as 
>>> Point of Local Repairs (PLRs), have to also be considered, e.g., in 
>>> addition to the PCEs.
>>> -->
>>> Good suggestion. Please, go with your proposed change. Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 12)  <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>> 
>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used 
>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how they 
>>> may be made consistent.
>>> 
>>> Segment Routing vs. segment routing
>>> (not including "Segment Routing over MPLS" or "Segment Routing over
>>> IPv6")
>>> 
>>> b) Note that we updated the text to reflect the forms on the right for 
>>> consistency. Please let us know if any further changes are needed.
>>> 
>>> Controller Plane -> controller plane (per RFCs 9016 and 9055)  Data 
>>> Plane -> data plane (per RFCs 9016, 9055, and 9551)  DetNet 
>>> Architecture -> DetNet architecture (per RFCs 8939 and 9016)  DetNet 
>>> control plane -> DetNet Control Plane (per RFC 9551)  DetNet 
>>> controller plane -> DetNet Controller Plane (per RFCs 9055 and 9551) 
>>> DetNet Data Plane Framework -> DetNet data plane framework (per RFC
>>> 8938)
>>> -->
>>> I would prefer:
>>> a) Segment Routing
>>> b) I am happy with your suggestions. Many thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of 
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>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>> 
>>> In addition, please consider whether "tradition" should be updated for 
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>>> author-instructions#table1> indicates that this term is potentially biased, 
>>> it is also ambiguous. "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the 
>>> same for everyone.
>>> 
>>> A):
>>> Note that in the DetNet overall architecture, the controller plane 
>>> includes what are more traditionally considered separate control and 
>>> management planes (see Section 4.4.2 of [RFC8655]).
>>> -->
>>> I propose to change to "usually" here.
>>> NEW:
>>> Note that in the DetNet overall architecture, the controller plane 
>>> includes what are usually considered as separate control and 
>>> management planes (see Section 4.4.2 of [RFC8655]).
>>> 
>>> 
>>> B):
>>> Traditionally, the management plane is primarily involved with fault 
>>> management, configuration management, and performance management 
>>> (sometimes accounting management and security management are also 
>>> considered in the management plane (Section 4.2 of
>>> [RFC6632]) but they are not in the scope of this document).
>>> -->
>>> I propose to remove here.
>>> NEW:
>>> The management plane is primarily involved with  fault management, 
>>> configuration management, and performance  management (sometimes 
>>> accounting management and security management  are also considered in 
>>> the management plane (Section 4.2 of
>>> [RFC6632]) but they are not in the scope of this document).
>>> 
>>> 
>>> C):
>>> For the purposes of this document, "traditional MPLS" is defined as 
>>> MPLS without the use of segment routing (see Section 4.4.3 for a 
>>> discussion of MPLS with segment routing) or MPLS-TP [RFC5960].
>>> -->
>>> I propose to change to "legacy" here.
>>> NEW:
>>> For the purposes of this document, "legacy MPLS" is defined as  MPLS 
>>> without the use of segment routing (see Section 4.4.3 for a 
>>> discussion of MPLS with segment routing) or MPLS-TP [RFC5960].
>>> 
>>> 
>>> D):
>>> In traditional MPLS domains, a dynamic control plane using 
>>> distributed signaling protocols is typically used for the 
>>> distribution of MPLS labels used for forwarding MPLS packets.
>>> -->
>>> I propose to change to "legacy" here.
>>> NEW:
>>> In legacy MPLS domains, a dynamic control plane using  distributed 
>>> signaling protocols is typically used for the  distribution of MPLS 
>>> labels used for forwarding MPLS packets.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> E):
>>> For the purposes of this document, "traditional IP" is defined as IP 
>>> without the use of segment routing (see Section 4.4.3 for a 
>>> discussion of IP with segment routing).
>>> -->
>>> I propose to change to "legacy" here.
>>> NEW:
>>> For the purposes of this document, "legacy IP" is defined as IP 
>>> without the use of segment routing (see Section 4.4.3 for a 
>>> discussion of IP with segment routing).
>>> 
>>> 
>>> F):
>>> Segment Routing reduces the amount of network signaling associated 
>>> with distributed signaling protocols, such as RSVP-TE, and also 
>>> reduces the amount of state in core nodes compared with that required 
>>> for traditional MPLS and IP routing, as the state is now  in the 
>>> packets rather than in the routers.
>>> -->
>>> I propose to change to "legacy" here.
>>> NEW:
>>> Segment Routing reduces the amount of network signaling associated 
>>> with distributed signaling protocols, such as RSVP-TE, and also 
>>> reduces the amount of state in core nodes compared with that required 
>>> for legacy MPLS and IP routing, as the state is now  in the packets 
>>> rather than in the routers.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Thank you.
>>> 
>>> Sarah Tarrant and Karen Moore
>>> RFC Production Center
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On Feb 20, 2026, at 5:52 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>>> 
>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>> 
>>> Updated 2026/02/20
>>> 
>>> RFC Author(s):
>>> --------------
>>> 
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>>> 
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>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC9938 (draft-ietf-detnet-controller-plane-framework-15)
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>>> Title            : A Framework for Deterministic Networking (DetNet) 
>>> Controller Plane
>>> Author(s)        : A. Malis, X. Geng, M. Chen, B. Varga, C. Bernardos
>>> WG Chair(s)      : Lou Berger, János Farkas
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