Hi Sarah,

On Fri, 20 Feb 2026 at 19:08, Sarah Tarrant
<[email protected]> wrote:
> [...]
> --
>
> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during Last 
> Call,
> please review the current version of the document:
>
> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
> * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments
> sections current?

Yes to both questions.

> 2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing your
> document. For example:
>
> * Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document?
> If so, please provide a pointer to that document (e.g., this document's
> terminology should match DNS terminology in RFC 9499).

The terminology is primarily based on EAT (RFC 9711).

> * Is there a pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms? (e.g., field 
> names
> should have initial capitalization; parameter names should be in double 
> quotes;
> <tt/> should be used for token names; etc.)

We have used <tt/> (more or less consistently) when using syntactic
elements that are taken from the CDDL-based grammar.

This document does not use any special capitalisation.

> 3) Please carefully review the entries and their URLs in the
> References section with the following in mind. Note that we will
> update as follows unless we hear otherwise at this time:
>
> * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current
> RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322
> (RFC Style Guide).
>
> * References to I-Ds that have been replaced by another I-D will be
> updated to point to the replacement I-D.
>
> * References to documents from other organizations that have been
> superseded will be updated to their superseding version.
>
> Note: To check for outdated RFC and I-D references, you can use
> idnits <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits>. You can also help the
> IETF Tools Team by testing idnits3 <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits3/>
> with your document and reporting any issues to them.

OK

> 4) Is there any text that requires special handling? For example:
> *Are there any sections that were contentious when the document was drafted?

ยง4.3.2. "Authority Identifier" was the result of multiple rounds of
careful adjustments.

> *Are any sections that need to be removed before publication marked as such
> (e.g., Implementation Status sections (per RFC 7942)).

Yes: Appendix B. "Open Issues".

> *Are there any instances of repeated text/sections that should be edited
> the same way?

Abstract and Introduction have some repeated text.

> 5) This document uses one or more of the following text styles.
> Are these elements used consistently?
>
> * fixed width font (<tt/> or `)

Yes, hopefully :-)

> * italics (<em/> or *)
> * bold (<strong/> or **)

No

> 6) This document contains sourcecode:
>
> * Does the sourcecode validate?

Yes, the data format is specified using CDDL, and CBOR EDN-formatted
examples are included.
All of this is automatically checked by the associated GitHub CI [1]

[1] 
https://github.com/ietf-rats-wg/draft-ietf-rats-eat-measured-component/tree/main/cddl

> * Some sourcecode types (e.g., YANG) require certain references and/or text
> in the Security Considerations section. Is this information correct?

n.a.

> * Is the sourcecode type indicated in the XML? (See information about
> types: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types.)

We use "cddl" for the grammar and "cbor-edn" for the examples.

> 7) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for editing in 
> kramdown-rfc?
> If so, please let us know and provide a self-contained kramdown-rfc file. For 
> more
> information about this experiment, see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.

The document makes heavy use of the "include" feature in kramdown-rfc
to source all the grammar fragments and examples [2].
So, unless it is possible to amalgamate everything into one kramdown
file, I am not sure that we are suitable candidates for the
experiment.

[2] 
https://github.com/ietf-rats-wg/draft-ietf-rats-eat-measured-component/blob/main/draft-ietf-rats-eat-measured-component.md

> 8) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for completing AUTH48 
> in
> GitHub? If so, please let us know. For more information about this experiment,
> see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=rpc-github-phase-0-pilot-test.

Yes

> 9) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing this
> document?

No

Thanks, cheers!

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