Thank you very much Steve. Thanks for the in detail recommendations. I will make modifications and let you know.
On Sat, May 5, 2012 at 9:22 PM, Steve Edwards <[email protected]>wrote: > On Sat, 5 May 2012, ABBAS SHAKEEL wrote: > > I wrote this article for making the things easy for newbies Please have a >> look and let me know if you suggest some thing. >> > > Please have a look and suggest changes >> http://younewplanet.com/**index.php/articles/2012-** >> articles-2/asterisk-**configuration-step-by-step<http://younewplanet.com/index.php/articles/2012-articles-2/asterisk-configuration-step-by-step> >> > > 1) I don't see anything in the article that requires 'at least university > level programming experience.' > > 2) Using shading and colors to highlight 'code' makes the article hard to > read and I suspect printing may render it useless. How about if you offset > the code sections using font (which you already do), indentation, and > consistent application of whitespace between code and text? > > 3) Did you intend to install most of the prerequisite packages with '-v' > instead of '-y?' > > 4) You should be consistent in your choice of font and font attributes in > your text. > > 5) You should 'proof' your article for consistent and correct whitespace > and capitalization. > > 6) You should have your article read by someone whose primary language is > English. I commend you for doing a better job than I could in any language > other that English, but the article does not 'read' well. > > 7) The inclusion of a loop-back connector is a nice touch. > > 8) In the 'Sound Files Conversion and Usage' section, you say 'Wav (this > is not the wav files that we play in windows it have a different > compression).' > > I think you are referring to WAV49. The WAV files I use ('RIFF > (little-endian) data, WAVE audio, Microsoft PCM, 16 bit, mono 8000 Hz') > play fine on Windows and Linux. If I remember correctly, WAV49 uses GSM > which confuses most Windows sound programs. > > 9) In the shell snippet to convert sound files, you use backticks to > substitute the file type. This method creates 3 processes. You can > accomplish this using shell parameter expansion without creating any > additional processes. For example > > sox "$a" "${a%.wav}.sln" > > Note that this method will not be confused by a file named 'test.wav.wav' > either. > > 10) You should present your 'Abbreviations' section in alphabetical order. > > I did not attempt to review most of the article for technical merit. I > suspect the inclusion of Java AGIs and storing CDRs in a database are > outside the interest of 'newbies' and warrant articles of their own. > > -- > Thanks in advance, > ------------------------------**------------------------------** > ------------- > Steve Edwards [email protected] Voice: +1-760-468-3867 PST > Newline Fax: +1-760-731-3000 > -- > _____________________________________________________________________ > -- Bandwidth and Colocation Provided by http://www.api-digital.com -- > New to Asterisk? Join us for a live introductory webinar every Thurs: > http://www.asterisk.org/hello > > asterisk-users mailing list > To UNSUBSCRIBE or update options visit: > http://lists.digium.com/mailman/listinfo/asterisk-users > -- Best Regards Shakeel Abbas
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