Nit:
s/manufacture/manufacturer/
See below for position.
Bill
On 20/06/2017 10:14 AM, Michael Richardson wrote:
>
> Based upon discussion last week about synchronizing the voucher document with
> the BRSKI MASA protocol the following clarification was made to the voucher
> document as part of the WGLC:
>
>
> - signed using a PKCS#7 structure. The voucher artifact is
> generated by
> - the pledge's manufacture or delegate (i.e. the MASA).</t>
> + signed using a PKCS#7 structure. The voucher artifact is normally
> generated by
> + the pledge's manufacture or delegate (i.e. the Manufacturer
> Authorized Signing
manufacturer
> + Authority). A voucher artifact could be signed by a non-MASA and
> be compliant
> + to the specified artifact format described in this document. The
> appropriate
> + use and trust of such vouchers is out-of-scope of this document.
> + </t>
>
> <t>This document only defines the voucher artifact, leaving it to
> other
> documents to describe specialized protocols for accessing it.</t>
> @@ -75,7 +79,8 @@
>
> <t>This document defines a strategy to securely assign a pledge to
> an owner,
> using an artifact signed, directly or indirectly, by the pledge's
> manufacturer
> - or delegate (i.e. the MASA). This artifact is known as the
> voucher.</t>
> + or delegate, i.e. the Manufacturer Authorized Signing
> + Authority (MASA). This artifact is known as the voucher.</t>
>
> <t>The voucher artifact is a JSON document, conforming to a data
> model
> described by YANG <xref target="RFC7950"/>, that has been signed
> using
> @@ -265,7 +270,7 @@ NOTE: All voucher types include a 'Pledge ID serial
> number'
>
> <section title="Voucher" anchor="voucher">
>
> - <t>The voucher's purpose is to securely assign a pledge to an owner.
> + <t>The voucher's primary purpose is to securely assign a pledge to
> an owner.
> The voucher informs the pledge which entity it should consider to be
> its owner.</t>
>
>
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> Michael Richardson <[email protected]>, Sandelman Software Works
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